【正文】 誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這封信使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如；be worried about；be bad fo as as possible 。Try one’s best； in order to； not only but also等；First；Second, Finally,等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。15．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，你們學校準備組織學生本周五去中國科技博物館參觀。你打算邀請交換生Peter參加。請用英語寫一封郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準備什么。提示詞語: school gate, 8:00, invention, experiment, knowledge, notebook, food and drink提示問題:When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Peter,How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit China Science and Technology Museum with my class. We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to China Science and Technology Museum together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only do some experiments but also watch some wonderful inventions. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You’d better take some food and drinks with you. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文，要求就學校準備組織學生本周五去中國科技博物館參觀的事情，寫一封郵件，邀請交換生Peter參加。要注意郵件的寫作格式，根據(jù)題目要求可判斷文章時態(tài)應用一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱。寫作要點包括：活動的時間、地點、活動內容，以及參觀時需要準備什么。在寫作的時候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假定你叫John，最近從報紙上得知英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關環(huán)保措施及更多信息。適當提出一點你的建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80—100；2．請不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；3．郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir or Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, John【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。內容是針對英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達歡迎和你的擔憂。注意電子郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個提綱要點，不要遺漏。行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。作文完成后，應該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達的要點和細節(jié)。本文的寫作要點：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；2．感到擔憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；3．希望了解有關環(huán)保措施及更多信息；最后，適當提出一點你的建議。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關系和情感態(tài)度）現(xiàn)在社會普遍對90后，00后有一些誤解， 認為他們自私、無禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學生，你又是怎么看待這個問題的呢? 請結合你自己和周圍同學的表現(xiàn)，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點和兩條不足之處進行描述。要求：，可適當發(fā)揮。【答案】As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內容應包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。18．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達同學們，三年的初中生活就要結束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內容包括：1．你在學?；蚣依镌浻龅降淖畲髥栴}或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述，寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么，一件事情即可，然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述，三個寫作要點要面面俱到，可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，