【正文】 構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問題，接下來介紹我們應(yīng)遵守的交通規(guī)則，最后指出人人認(rèn)為交通安全是自己的事，我們才能在路上安全行駛。此處e into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（寧夏中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，作為交換生你去年在美國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)了一學(xué)期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇日記。1. 介紹Tom：為人友好，樂于助人，你們相處很融洽；2. 他在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面給你的幫助；你了解了美國(guó)的文化；3. 他的父母悉心照顧你的生活，給你做中國(guó)菜。4. ……（自由發(fā)揮，至少談及兩項(xiàng)內(nèi)容）；5. 希望他和他的家人能來中國(guó)。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．合理增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Friday May 27th, Sunny_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Friday May 27th, SunnyI’m feeling a little unhappy while I am writing this because I am going to return to China. I lived in Tom’s home in America when I studied in America. Though we had only studied together for a term, we were good friends. Tom is kind, friendly and helpful. We got on well with each other. He did a lot to help me with my English. My English has improved greatly with his help. I know more American culture. I really appreciate what he did for me. His parents took good care of me. They tried to cook Chinese food for me. I will leave for China today. I hope his family will e to China one day. I am looking forward to seeing them in China again.【解析】這是一篇要求介紹自己為交換生你去年在美國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)了一學(xué)期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇日記。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。17．（北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，學(xué)校英語廣播站正在招募主持人。請(qǐng)你用英文給負(fù)責(zé)的老師 Sam 寫一封自薦信，內(nèi)容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及具體打算做的事情。提示詞語： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示問題： ● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英語廣播站）. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Huafrom Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs inmy spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my oralEnglish, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which theyare interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce somewestern culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautifulEnglish music and poems. I’d be very happy if I bee a host.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是圍繞一篇演講稿展開，貼近學(xué)校生活，學(xué)生有話可寫。但是在寫作上一定要注意審題，不要跑題或者偏題。要按要點(diǎn)和給出的提示問題來完成寫作任務(wù)，但不能生硬的寫幾個(gè)句子交待了事，切記，逐條生硬的翻譯，沒有任何的連接詞。在詞匯的運(yùn)用上，除了用自己熟悉的句型與詞匯外，注意句型的變化，連詞的使用使詞義連貫流暢，同時(shí)也使得文章有層次感，有條理性。注意高級(jí)句型的運(yùn)用提升文章的檔次。寫作亮點(diǎn)：文章開頭點(diǎn)明主題，表明目的，然后對(duì)自己進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要的個(gè)人介紹。句型變化多，有定語從句的使用，數(shù)量恰當(dāng)，句式豐富，短語多樣。關(guān)于討論自己的競(jìng)選后的工作計(jì)劃，使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)（I am going to not only introduce some western culture…），有結(jié)尾，（I’m looking forward to your early reply.）體現(xiàn)了文章的完整性。18．（湖南長(zhǎng)郡中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)76,近年來，科技的進(jìn)步正在逐步影響著人們的日常生活。年5月，來39。自一帶一 路”沿線的20國(guó)青年評(píng)選出了中國(guó)的“新四大發(fā)明”:高鐵、支付寶、共享單車和網(wǎng)購(gòu)。 假如你是李華，你的朋友Lisa是英國(guó)的一名初中生，她對(duì)我們的“新四大發(fā)明”很感 興趣。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封電子郵件，具體內(nèi)容如下： ，將展出學(xué)生制作的各類材質(zhì)的小模型。注意:，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) ，使行文流暢。參考詞匯:共享單車:shared bikes Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about are highspeed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online travel by highspeed are very use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared use our mobile phone to unlock the shared is convenient and is no pollution and oil can also keep healthy when we ride will be the Science Festival in our will show all kinds of models that students hope you will e to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹中國(guó)的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。19．（西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）由于父母的溺愛，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情，導(dǎo)致獨(dú)立生活能力不強(qiáng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下建議；自己的事情自己做； 家里得事情幫著做； 學(xué)校的事情搶著做，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力。要求；，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范2. 字?jǐn)?shù)70 字左右（短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)） As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to makeus independent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?First, let39。s begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立能力。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料