【正文】 構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問題，接下來介紹我們應遵守的交通規(guī)則，最后指出人人認為交通安全是自己的事，我們才能在路上安全行駛。此處e into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（寧夏中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，作為交換生你去年在美國學習了一學期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學期里，你和他及他的家人結下了深厚的友誼。請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇日記。1. 介紹Tom：為人友好，樂于助人，你們相處很融洽；2. 他在英語學習方面給你的幫助；你了解了美國的文化；3. 他的父母悉心照顧你的生活，給你做中國菜。4. ……（自由發(fā)揮，至少談及兩項內(nèi)容）；5. 希望他和他的家人能來中國。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．合理增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Friday May 27th, Sunny_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Friday May 27th, SunnyI’m feeling a little unhappy while I am writing this because I am going to return to China. I lived in Tom’s home in America when I studied in America. Though we had only studied together for a term, we were good friends. Tom is kind, friendly and helpful. We got on well with each other. He did a lot to help me with my English. My English has improved greatly with his help. I know more American culture. I really appreciate what he did for me. His parents took good care of me. They tried to cook Chinese food for me. I will leave for China today. I hope his family will e to China one day. I am looking forward to seeing them in China again.【解析】這是一篇要求介紹自己為交換生你去年在美國學習了一學期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學期里，你和他及他的家人結下了深厚的友誼。請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇日記。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，一般過去時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。17．（北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，學校英語廣播站正在招募主持人。請你用英文給負責的老師 Sam 寫一封自薦信，內(nèi)容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及具體打算做的事情。提示詞語： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示問題： ● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英語廣播站）. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Huafrom Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs inmy spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my oralEnglish, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which theyare interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce somewestern culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautifulEnglish music and poems. I’d be very happy if I bee a host.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達是圍繞一篇演講稿展開，貼近學校生活，學生有話可寫。但是在寫作上一定要注意審題，不要跑題或者偏題。要按要點和給出的提示問題來完成寫作任務，但不能生硬的寫幾個句子交待了事，切記，逐條生硬的翻譯，沒有任何的連接詞。在詞匯的運用上，除了用自己熟悉的句型與詞匯外，注意句型的變化，連詞的使用使詞義連貫流暢，同時也使得文章有層次感，有條理性。注意高級句型的運用提升文章的檔次。寫作亮點：文章開頭點明主題，表明目的，然后對自己進行簡要的個人介紹。句型變化多，有定語從句的使用，數(shù)量恰當，句式豐富，短語多樣。關于討論自己的競選后的工作計劃，使用了正確的時態(tài)進行表達（I am going to not only introduce some western culture…），有結尾，（I’m looking forward to your early reply.）體現(xiàn)了文章的完整性。18．（湖南長郡中學中考模擬）書面表達76,近年來，科技的進步正在逐步影響著人們的日常生活。年5月，來39。自一帶一 路”沿線的20國青年評選出了中國的“新四大發(fā)明”:高鐵、支付寶、共享單車和網(wǎng)購。 假如你是李華，你的朋友Lisa是英國的一名初中生，她對我們的“新四大發(fā)明”很感 興趣。請你給她寫一封電子郵件，具體內(nèi)容如下： ，將展出學生制作的各類材質(zhì)的小模型。注意:，開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù) ，使行文流暢。參考詞匯:共享單車:shared bikes Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about are highspeed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online travel by highspeed are very use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared use our mobile phone to unlock the shared is convenient and is no pollution and oil can also keep healthy when we ride will be the Science Festival in our will show all kinds of models that students hope you will e to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹中國的新四大發(fā)明，題目中給出了具體的寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。19．（西安市鐵一中學中考模擬）由于父母的溺愛，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學習以外的事情，導致獨立生活能力不強。請你根據(jù)以下建議；自己的事情自己做； 家里得事情幫著做； 學校的事情搶著做，談談作為中學生，我們應該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨立能力。要求；，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范2. 字數(shù)70 字左右（短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總字數(shù)） As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to makeus independent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?First, let39。s begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談談作為中學生，我們應該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨立能力。【詳解】結合所給材料