【正文】 可以根據(jù)自己所想來寫作，而不用受到內(nèi)容的限制。寫之前，要注意確定文章應使用的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇作文應以第一人稱we為主，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述。注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應注意英語句式表達習慣和漢語是不同的，以主謂賓和主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎，寫出正確的句子，然后為提升文章檔次，使用幾個較復雜的句型，如復合句、非謂語動詞、被動結(jié)構(gòu)等等。還應注意語句之間的連接，使用一些短語、副詞等，使整篇文章意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，并且內(nèi)容充實、完整，表達清楚、明了。作者從三個方面講述了自己的看法，這幾個方面都非常符合實際，所提建議很合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)、第一人稱為主，語法規(guī)范、準確，符合英語的表達習慣。文章里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves ；再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.中非謂語動詞的使用。文章各部分之間使用了較好的連接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，這些詞匯和短語的使用讓文章具有連貫性。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你的筆友 John 將作為交換生在中國家庭生活一周，他寫了一封 注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 80 左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear John,向你求助。請根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容寫封回信。Dear Li Hua,I will e to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?Please write back soon.Yours, JohnDear John,I’m glad you will e to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,I39。m glad you will e to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don39。t need to worry about it.If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It39。s not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that.In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means Nice to meet you, Thank you and so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What39。s more, read some books about Chinese customs before ing here. Try not to make any misunderstandings.I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.Yours, Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，回信給約翰，建議他在中國家庭生活應注意的事項。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I39。m glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It39。s not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭告訴他不必擔心，接下來回答他的問題以及建議他如何做，最后希望他在中國玩得高興。此處need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（北京中考模擬）我區(qū)正在全力創(chuàng)建全國文明城區(qū)。假如你是李華，你打算邀請你們班交換生Peter參加下周日學校組織的志愿活動。請用英語寫一封邀請函，告訴他活動的時間和地點，活動內(nèi)容以及需要做什么準備。提示詞語： Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, gloves, shoes 提示問題：When and where will you go?What will you do in this activity?What do you advise Peter to prepare for this activity?Dear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Li HuaDear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear PeterHow is it going?I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volunteer for a better environment. We’ll go to the park near our school at 9 o’clock on Sunday morning.We’ll pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. If you decide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.I’m looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，寫作要點為：1. 志愿者活動的時間和地點。2. 活動中做些什么。3. 建議彼得為這次活動做哪些準備。然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。17．（北京中考模擬）友誼是焦渴時的甘泉， 黑暗中的明燈； 友誼是快樂時的分享， 憂傷時的撫慰……某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展“ Friendship”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談你最珍視的一段友誼，主要內(nèi)容包括：你最好的朋友是誰，你們?nèi)绾纬蔀楹门笥训模约澳銥槭裁凑湟暷銈冎g的友誼。提示詞語：in trouble, help, encourage, together, treasure, happy提示問題：Who is your best friend?How did you bee best friends?Why do you treasure the friendship between you?As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs life without a friend is a life without the sun. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyone39。s life. Friends are your part of life. Friends make you believe that there really is good in the world. My best friend is Mary. When I am down, she lifts me up. When I lose my way, she guides me and cheer me on. So cherish your friend, Do not save your loving speeches for your friends. With the help of friends, your life is colourful.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，“ Friendship”為主題寫一篇短文，談談我最珍視的一段友誼。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I believe that……，F(xiàn)riendship is ……，F(xiàn)riends are……，When I lose……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了友誼的重要性，接下來介紹我的一段友誼，最后指出如何對待你的朋友。此處lift sb up, lose one’s way, cheer sb on, with the help of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。18．（靖江外國語學校中考模擬）書面表達根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文?；厩闆r張陽，陽光中學九年級二班學生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。每周花七個多小時閱讀各種類型的書，因為……。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個人為保護環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，并適當發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實