【正文】 ________________________________________________________________________Editor,Jack【答案】I’m the editor of WARM hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對某位同學(xué)考前焦慮進行安慰，分析原因并給出消除焦慮的建議。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級，the+比較級，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語放句首，用半倒裝。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。15．（廣東實驗中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達農(nóng)歷五月初五，我們學(xué)校將舉行“弘揚中華傳統(tǒng)文化——端午節(jié)The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主題活動，請你邀請外國友人Amy來校參加。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給她寫一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：時間：農(nóng)歷五月初五地點：學(xué)校操場目的：深入了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化內(nèi)容：文化展覽歷史介紹：兩千多年，紀念屈原體驗民間活動：賽龍舟，包粽子活動意義：1．2．參考詞匯：農(nóng)歷：Chinese Lunar calendar Dear Amy,I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near future.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如learn from，want to know something，the Chinese traditional festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，share with，more than 2000 years，according to，a kind of，in memory of，In a word，look back on history，get together with family，in the near future等。特別是I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival./ we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family./ I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near ，是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。16．（北京中考模擬）現(xiàn)在，某英文報紙正在開展以＂遇見美＂為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談一談生活中你遇見美的一次經(jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括你什么時候在哪里遇見了美，經(jīng)歷了什么事情以及你為什么覺得它美。提示詞語：visit, touch, impress, meaningful, amazing, memory提示問題：1. When and where did it happen?2. What did you experience?3. Why was it beautiful?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.【解析】試題分析：本文以＂遇見美＂為主題的短文，談?wù)勆钪杏鲆娒赖囊淮谓?jīng)歷，所以句子的主語是第一人稱單數(shù)，句子的謂語動詞用一般過去時，要注意不要遺漏要點，要注意上下文的銜接，用自己熟悉的短語和句式。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give ；用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat i