【正文】 ________________________________________________________________________Editor,Jack【答案】I’m the editor of WARM hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話(huà)題作文，針對(duì)某位同學(xué)考前焦慮進(jìn)行安慰，分析原因并給出消除焦慮的建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語(yǔ)放句首，用半倒裝。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。15．（廣東實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)農(nóng)歷五月初五，我們學(xué)校將舉行“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化——端午節(jié)The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你邀請(qǐng)外國(guó)友人Amy來(lái)校參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給她寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：時(shí)間：農(nóng)歷五月初五地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校操場(chǎng)目的：深入了解中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化內(nèi)容：文化展覽歷史介紹：兩千多年，紀(jì)念屈原體驗(yàn)民間活動(dòng)：賽龍舟，包粽子活動(dòng)意義：1．2．參考詞匯：農(nóng)歷：Chinese Lunar calendar Dear Amy,I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near future.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如learn from，want to know something，the Chinese traditional festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，share with，more than 2000 years，according to，a kind of，in memory of，In a word，look back on history，get together with family，in the near future等。特別是I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival./ we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family./ I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near ，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（北京中考模擬）現(xiàn)在，某英文報(bào)紙正在開(kāi)展以＂遇見(jiàn)美＂為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。談一談生活中你遇見(jiàn)美的一次經(jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括你什么時(shí)候在哪里遇見(jiàn)了美，經(jīng)歷了什么事情以及你為什么覺(jué)得它美。提示詞語(yǔ)：visit, touch, impress, meaningful, amazing, memory提示問(wèn)題：1. When and where did it happen?2. What did you experience?3. Why was it beautiful?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.【解析】試題分析：本文以＂遇見(jiàn)美＂為主題的短文，談?wù)勆钪杏鲆?jiàn)美的一次經(jīng)歷，所以句子的主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)單數(shù)，句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，要注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要注意上下文的銜接，用自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)和句式。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give ；用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat i