【正文】 o, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而復雜并列結構They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化；同時Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。14．（山東中考模擬）寫作讀萬卷書,行萬里路。為幫助中小學生了解國情、熱愛祖國、開闊眼界、增長知識,提高社會責任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力,教育部倡導開展“研學旅行 （study tour）”活動。你校也計劃開展此項活動,但是有些學生表示歡迎,也有些表示反對。請你以 My Opinions onStudy Tour為題,寫一篇英語短文,談談你的看法并說明理由。要求,可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。、校名:80100（文章開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)）。可參考以下詞匯the sense of social responsibility社會責任感。 creative spirit創(chuàng)新精神。 practical ability實踐能力My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forStudents 【答案】My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forstudents so that they can have a better understanding of life and students are crazy about such tours while others show their great concerns.Personally ,I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study of the time,studennts acquire knowledge and skills from walking out of the campus,they can learn through their own experiences and can understand better about what they have learned from textbooks. Besides,study tours contribute a lot to shaping a student’s life values and bee more confident in getting along with also helps students develop the sense of social responsibility, creative spirit and practical ability.Of course,we must put safety in the first place in the course of study tour,which is also the major concern of our parents and schools.【解析】1. 本題為話題作文，給定的話題為My Opinions on Study Tour. 研學旅行之我見。2. 寫出我們學校組織這次學習旅游的目的, 是讓學生對生活和社會有一個更好的了解。 3. 介紹學生對這次研學旅行的看法，有些學生表示歡迎，也有些表示反對。 4. 具體介紹本人的觀點。（1）對培養(yǎng)學生的學習興趣起著至關重要的作用。（2）可以通過自己的經(jīng)驗和觀察來學習。（3）學習旅游有助于塑造學生的人生價值觀和個性，使他們更加自信地與他人相處，也有助于培養(yǎng)學生的社會責任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力。5. 最后要提出安全的要求。我們必須把安全放在第一位。 6. 時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。人稱較為靈活。 15．（山東中考模擬）書面表達隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和手機終端發(fā)展，成癮性網(wǎng)絡游戲使一些中學生沉迷其中，影響了學習進步和身心健康。上周你們學校開展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many puter games ”為主題的專題討論。請根據(jù)下表中的要點提示，寫一篇短文，提出一些意見。學校要做些什么；，如運動會，外出游玩等；, ……； 家長要做些什么，多陪伴，……；，……；學生要做些什么……（至少兩點）注意 ，可適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；，短文開頭已給出，不計總詞數(shù)；；Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many puter games .The students have different opinions.【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many puter games. The students have different opinions. They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can municate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must e first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭。我們只要用英語正確的把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點就行。動筆前要真人閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。根據(jù)題目要求，短文是一篇議論文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第三人稱。寫作中要注意適當使用連詞，注意上下文緊密聯(lián)系。符合邏輯關系。高分句型【1】They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他們認為他們的學?？梢蚤_班會，幫助他們認識到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利與弊。動詞不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the 。高分句型【2】Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外，學校應該定期舉辦有益的校外活動。此句是含有情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)。其構成為：情態(tài)動詞+be+及物動詞的過去分詞。高分句型【3】Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 與學校緊密合作是家長幫助他們的另一重要途徑。動名詞Working closely with schools作主語，視作單數(shù)，因此be動詞用is。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達難忘的初中三年學習生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對自己未來的期待。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。注意:。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。，并補充相關信息，可適當發(fā)揮。語言連貫、通順。、校名等相關信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.