【正文】 g for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題目要求可知，本文說的時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱是第一和第二人稱英語作文一般是三段式第一段：開篇點(diǎn)題，交代寫作目的——保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，以及提建議第二段：文章主體部分——保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長時間讀書看報；②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書；③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題，并提出號召——現(xiàn)在開始養(yǎng)成保護(hù)眼睛的好習(xí)慣。14．（全國中考模擬）微笑是人類最美的語言。某英文報以“Smiles”為題,舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動。請根據(jù)下面的圖表信息,寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事給予你的啟示。提示：,條理清楚,行文連貫；； 數(shù)不少于80。【答案】SmilesA smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts and helps us get on well with each other. A person who often smiles usually brings good luck. What’s more, smile can give us confidence.When I was young, I was very shy. I was afraid to speak in public. One day, I needed to give a speech in my English class. I was so frighten that I did badly at the beginning. But when I saw a big smile on my teacher’s face, I got more and more confident. Finally, I made it.Smiles are very helpful in our daily lives. We should often keep smiles on our faces, If we are happy, we smile. If we meet difficulties, we should smile, too. Let’s smile to life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。要求以“Smiles”為題，根據(jù)圖表提示信息，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事給予你的啟示。根據(jù)所給的提示材料可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱主要用第一人稱。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。15．（合肥市第四十二中學(xué)中考模擬）每個人的生命只有一次。請你以“How to Protect Our Lives”為題，從安全和健康的角度入手，寫一篇如何珍惜和保護(hù)我們生命的短文，要點(diǎn)如下：1. 交通安全，校園安全2. 健康的飲食和生活3. ... ...參考詞匯：treasure（v.）珍惜注意：1. 詞數(shù)80~100；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。【答案】How to Protect Our LivesIt is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our lives.First of all, we should obey the traffic rules and pay attention to traffic safety.Secondly, we should not chase and fight in school. Don39。t climb trees, don39。t play dangerous games.Thirdly, we should eat some healthy foods, such as vegetables, fruits, and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.Finally, a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，first of all，obey the traffic rules，pay attention to，such as，and so on，be able to，learn to do等。而固定句型It is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容；同時First of all,/ Secondly,/ Thirdly,和Finally,等詞使表達(dá)條理，層次清晰，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（寧夏中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，作為交換生你去年在美國學(xué)習(xí)了一學(xué)期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇日記。1. 介紹Tom：為人友好，樂于助人，你們相處很融洽；2. 他在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面給你的幫助；你了解了美國的文化；3. 他的父母悉心照顧你的生活，給你做中國菜。4. ……（自由發(fā)揮，至少談及兩項(xiàng)內(nèi)容）；5. 希望他和他的家人能來中國。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．合理增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Friday May 27th, Sunny_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Friday May 27th, SunnyI’m feeling a little unhappy while I am writing this because I am going to return to China. I lived in Tom’s home in America when I studied in America. Though we had only studied together for a term, we were good friends. Tom is kind, friendly and helpful. We got on well with each other. He did a lot to help me with my English. My English has improved greatly with his help. I know more American culture. I really appreciate what he did for me. His parents took good care of me. They tried to cook Chinese food for me. I will leave for China today. I hope his family will e to China one day. I am looking forward to seeing them in China again.【解析】這是一篇要求介紹自己為交換生你去年在美國學(xué)習(xí)了一學(xué)期。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇日記。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般過去時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。17．（海南中考模擬）“美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護(hù)她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學(xué)生，請你寫一篇短文號召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動中來。要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile,