【正文】 y my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。要求以The person I want to thank為題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：誰是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學到了什么？根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知本文時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱主要用第一人稱和第三人稱。在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。另外，可以用上一些句型、短語，較高級的語言，這樣會使文章更出色。最后必須認真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。14．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達 Hey Li Ming,I will move to your munity and stay for two months. I want to know something about your munity. What is your munity like? What activities do you usually have? How can I get along with your neighbors?Write soon!Yours,Ben假如你是Li Ming，請用英語給筆友Ben回復郵件。注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Ben,I’m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. Yours, Li Ming【答案】Dear Ben,I’ m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. My munity is in the northern part of the city. It’s not a big one, but it’s quite beautiful. You can see a garden with different flowers when entering it. You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it.Besides, we also have different activities. For example, people in Helping Hand Club always do some shopping for the old who live alone. Every weekend, college students always help us with our homework.All the people in our munity are kind and easy to get on with. You’d better say “Hello” to greet them. If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.That’s all about our munity. I hope you will have a good time here.Yours, Li Ming【解析】試題分析：本文是要求寫一封電子郵件，寫作時注意要寫信的格式。假如你是Li Ming，請用英語給筆友Ben回復郵件。動筆前要認真閱讀電子郵件，寫作時需回答郵件內(nèi)所提問題，可適當發(fā)揮。仔細閱讀本的電子郵件，找出他的問題（我想了解一下你們社區(qū)的情況。你的社區(qū)是什么樣的？你通常有什么活動？我怎樣和你的鄰居相處？），然后根據(jù)問題做出回答。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 社區(qū)是什么樣的in the northern part of the city/ big but quite beautiful/ a garden with different flowers. 2. 活動do some shopping for the old who live alone/ college students always help us with our . 怎樣和鄰居相處kind and easy to get on with./“Hello” to greet them. /If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，然后連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標點符號，主謂一致等是否有錯誤。點睛：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語言表達要符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準確、句子通順。（1）學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時態(tài)），學生運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點，及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運用適當?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。注意表達的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標點符號等的正確運用。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。15．（江蘇中考模擬）假如你叫Sandy，你收到了你的英文筆友Lucy的來信。請你用英文給她寫一封回信，針對她的問題，談談你的看法，并給出可行的建議。Dear Sandy, I am very glad to enter my school. I enjoy the life here except for the school lunch. I prefer hamburgers,ice creams and potato chips,but we are not allowed to order them according to the school rules. I usually have little for lunch and I often feel tired and can39。t follow the teachers in the afternoon classes. What should I do? Do you have any good ideas? Please write to me as soon as possible.Yours sincerely,Lucy注意事項:，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關信息。Dear Lucy,I am glad to receive your letter. Yours,Sandy【答案】Dear Lucy,I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand your feeling and I39。m worried about your health and your study. Here are some suggestions for you.First, hamburgers, ice creams and potato chips are bad for your health, so you had better give up the thought that you want to eat them at school. Second, try to eat as much school lunch as possible in order to have enough energy. Try your best and everything will be all right soon. Finally, if there is really something wrong with the school lunch, you can talk to your teachers and help improve it. It39。s not only for yourself, but also for the whole school. Good luck. Yours,Sandy【解析】本文內(nèi)容應包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這封信使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如；be worried about；be bad fo as as possible 。Try one’s best； in order to； not only but also等；First；Second, Finally,等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。16．（天津中考模擬）根據(jù)聯(lián)合國教科文組織的統(tǒng)計顯示，北歐國家國民每年讀書24本左右,美國人年均閱讀7本書，.韓國人11本書，日本、而中國國民人均讀書數(shù)量低于5本。你的閱讀量是多少？作為一名中學生，你應該怎么做？請根據(jù)下列表格中所給要點，寫一篇英語短文。要 點讀書好；,帶來快樂；好（h224。o）讀書；讀好書；5.—本好書改變?nèi)说囊簧?。要?,可適當發(fā)揮；,字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80；：,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:身心健康：mental and physical healthNowadays,reading is being more and more popular among_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s be activereaders and enjoy reading.【答案】Nowadays，reading is being more and more popular among us．　People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don39。t think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old sayingTo open a book is always helpfulclearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we