【正文】 、向子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”為話題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、讓步狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。17．（福建中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來(lái)，西方文化如潮水般涌來(lái)，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要。假如你是Mike,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件，給你校英文報(bào)投稿寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化面對(duì)的問(wèn)題，接下來(lái)介紹我認(rèn)為開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因，最后號(hào)召更多的學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。此處because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。18．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。隨著連云港經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，而同時(shí)我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴(yán)重，去年我們經(jīng)歷了柳絮漫天飛舞以及數(shù)個(gè)霧霾天氣（hazy days），生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此，你班展開(kāi)討論美麗連云港應(yīng)該從何做起，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。連云港現(xiàn)狀美麗連云港從我做起未來(lái)展望①車輛越來(lái)越多②空氣越來(lái)越差③…….①出門坐公交，步行，騎車②……③…….①水更清，天更藍(lán)②……注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；；開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；。Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。s a worrying problem. Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem. I think there are many things we can do to help. We can take a bus, ride a bike or go somewhere on foot. What39。s more, more trees and grass should be planted to reduce the pollution.. If we try our best, I believe in the future we will have more clear days and clean rivers. Let39。s work together to make a difference to our homeland!【解析】寫作分析：這篇書面表達(dá)的背景是空氣污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，生活環(huán)境在不斷惡化，需要完成的寫作任務(wù)是，描述連云港的現(xiàn)狀講一講如何從我做起建設(shè)美麗連云港對(duì)未來(lái)的結(jié)果進(jìn)行展望。需要注意的是正確使用相關(guān)短語(yǔ)表達(dá)和時(shí)態(tài)，尤其是在描述展望未來(lái)時(shí)需要借助將來(lái)時(shí)，各個(gè)部分之間要注意合理連接，保證文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言連貫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出來(lái)了，于是可以開(kāi)始正文的敘述，首先是描述現(xiàn)狀，用到的短語(yǔ)表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，例如too much traffic on the road道路上車輛過(guò)多，bees worse and ，does harm to our health對(duì)我們的健康有害，也用到了很實(shí)用的句型It has bee impossible for us to do…做…對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō)已經(jīng)變得不可能了。在銜接下一部分“采取措施”時(shí)，用了一句話過(guò)度，Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem.（因此，應(yīng)該采取行動(dòng)來(lái)解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。），最后有對(duì)未來(lái)的展望，用到了條件句的主將從現(xiàn)，也用到了Let39。s work together to do讓我們一起來(lái)做…這樣的句型，總體來(lái)說(shuō)文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，完成了要求的寫作任務(wù)。19．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)我們的國(guó)家日益強(qiáng)大，人民也變得富足因而有實(shí)力在國(guó)內(nèi)外旅游。但是近來(lái)一些中國(guó)人在國(guó)內(nèi)外的不文明行為屢屢發(fā)生并被曝光。我們的社會(huì)在呼喚文明的回歸，但是做到文明必須縣有禮貌。請(qǐng)以It’s Important to Be Polite 為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶āＲ螅?．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3．80詞左右。It’s Important to Be Polite