【正文】 注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（2）根據(jù)內(nèi)容確定短文時(shí)態(tài)，學(xué)生要運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語(yǔ)，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)，及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。 （4）注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。 （5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)，語(yǔ)法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)序，主謂一致等。16．（北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站正在招募主持人。請(qǐng)你用英文給負(fù)責(zé)的老師 Sam 寫(xiě)一封自薦信，內(nèi)容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及具體打算做的事情。提示詞語(yǔ)： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示問(wèn)題： ● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英語(yǔ)廣播站）. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Huafrom Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs inmy spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my oralEnglish, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which theyare interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce somewestern culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautifulEnglish music and poems. I’d be very happy if I bee a host.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是圍繞一篇演講稿展開(kāi)，貼近學(xué)校生活，學(xué)生有話(huà)可寫(xiě)。但是在寫(xiě)作上一定要注意審題，不要跑題或者偏題。要按要點(diǎn)和給出的提示問(wèn)題來(lái)完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，但不能生硬的寫(xiě)幾個(gè)句子交待了事，切記，逐條生硬的翻譯，沒(méi)有任何的連接詞。在詞匯的運(yùn)用上，除了用自己熟悉的句型與詞匯外，注意句型的變化，連詞的使用使詞義連貫流暢，同時(shí)也使得文章有層次感，有條理性。注意高級(jí)句型的運(yùn)用提升文章的檔次。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：文章開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)明主題，表明目的，然后對(duì)自己進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要的個(gè)人介紹。句型變化多，有定語(yǔ)從句的使用，數(shù)量恰當(dāng)，句式豐富，短語(yǔ)多樣。關(guān)于討論自己的競(jìng)選后的工作計(jì)劃，使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)（I am going to not only introduce some western culture…），有結(jié)尾，（I’m looking forward to your early reply.）體現(xiàn)了文章的完整性。17．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)不久前你們學(xué)校為貧困地區(qū)的孩子們籌款舉辦了一次慈善行活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)以“Walk for children in poor areas”為題，為某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1. 目的：為貧困地區(qū)的孩子們籌款2. 時(shí)間：10月23日，星期六3. 路徑： 學(xué)?！兄行?. 簡(jiǎn)況：學(xué)生把自己分成四人一組，出發(fā)前計(jì)劃好了一切，步行很艱辛，但活動(dòng)過(guò)程中大家互相幫助，互相支持。最終在許多人的幫助下，籌的善款5萬(wàn)多元。5. 感受：每個(gè)人都很累，但都很高興，因?yàn)椤?注意：1. 報(bào)道必須把包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；2. 第5要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用至少2句話(huà)展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Walk for children in poor areasNot long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It was on Saturday, 23rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard （tough） work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over （more than） 50,000 yuan in the end. We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it wasan excellent chance to learn team spirit.【解析】【詳解】本篇文章屬于報(bào)道類(lèi)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去式為主。重點(diǎn)詞匯：（1）walk from …… to……從……步行到……；（2）With the help of many people在許多人的幫助下； （3）over （more than）超過(guò)；（4）in the end在最后；（5）raise money籌款。重點(diǎn)句型：Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. 步行之前，我們把自己分成四組，并計(jì)劃好一切。Group……into….把……劃分……。Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit. 因?yàn)檫@是一次有意義的經(jīng)歷，也是學(xué)習(xí)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神的好機(jī)會(huì)。a meaningful experience一次有意義的經(jīng)歷；an excellent chance極好的機(jī)會(huì)。18．（山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)（湖南衡陽(yáng)）榮光學(xué)校九年級(jí)（2）班就“環(huán)境問(wèn)題”召開(kāi)了一次班會(huì)，并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”為題進(jìn)行了一次討論。許多同學(xué)對(duì)未來(lái)表示樂(lè)觀(guān)，但也有些同學(xué)對(duì)未來(lái)有些擔(dān)心。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。樂(lè)觀(guān)者的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。擔(dān)心者的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。你的觀(guān)點(diǎn)及你的打算學(xué)生自擬（至少兩點(diǎn)）提示：。、語(yǔ)句通順、連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80.參考詞匯：optimistic government 　　take measures to采取措施　private Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years. 【答案】Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic（樂(lè)觀(guān)的）about tour environment in ten years．In fact，they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.However，other students are worried about the future．They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.．Therefore，we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily．【解析】這篇作文要求我們就榮光中學(xué)九年級(jí)2班的同學(xué)們對(duì)環(huán)境問(wèn)題所召開(kāi)的一次班會(huì)情況進(jìn)行介紹。這個(gè)班會(huì)的主題是Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?，對(duì)于未來(lái)的環(huán)境，很多同學(xué)吃樂(lè)觀(guān)的態(tài)度，而其他同學(xué)感到很擔(dān)心。題目中用表格的形式給我們呈現(xiàn)了這些內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)將他們表達(dá)出來(lái)，首先我們應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫汀⒃~匯和短語(yǔ)，以簡(jiǎn)單句的結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓、主系表等，點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句或復(fù)合句，提升文章檔次。其次注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。最后應(yīng)注意在語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章的邏輯關(guān)系更加合理，文意流暢、連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，并根據(jù)表達(dá)