【正文】 個觀點來講述，并結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，給出2到3個理由。寫作之前，我們應(yīng)先從正方和反方中選擇一個，作為自己的觀點，然后圍繞這一觀點闡述自己的理由。這是一篇話題作文，題目中并沒有給我們規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，結(jié)合自己的日常生活來組織語言，豐富文章的內(nèi)容。寫作時還應(yīng)注意的是語言的表達，英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，我們不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯，而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型，多用簡單句，如主謂賓、主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)，點綴幾個復(fù)合句或并列句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，讓文章的句子富于變化，有新鮮感。高級句型或詞匯的使用也可以提升文章的檔次，在語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意表達連貫、流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，觀點明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點，第一句話先點明自己的觀點是什么，接下來圍繞這一觀點進行闡述，并從自己的經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，闡述了自己持有這一觀點的理由，充分、合理，有說服力。最后一段作者重申自己的觀點，并進行了總結(jié)。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)、人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。句式表達符合英語的表達習(xí)慣，簡單句為主，也使用了較多的復(fù)合句和高級句型，如狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞等。有些句子較長，是由于使用高級句型所致，一味使用較長的句子也會導(dǎo)致文章的冗長，讓讀者感覺比較累，因此要注意調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句型和短語有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal 。14．（湖北中考模擬）為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽?，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇參賽短文。提示：1. 保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；2. 待人有禮，樂于助人；3. 遵守交通規(guī)則；4. 寫出1到2條自己的觀點。要求：1. 文章必須包括所給提示中1—3項內(nèi)容，可展開思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 內(nèi)容連貫，表達通順。3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞。How to Behave Well_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.Our city should be kept clean every day, so it’s bad manners to litter everywhere. And we should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. It’s also important for us to follow traffic rules. We can only go across the road ,when the traffic lights are green. What’s more, we39。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇演講稿，講我們應(yīng)該如何做才是文明舉止，因此人稱用第一人稱we來寫，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，重點句型及短語：in order to為了，try one39。s best to do ，be friendly to ，be ready to do ，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do 。had better not do ，也可用到should等情態(tài)動詞或祈使句。15．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，即將結(jié)束在美國的交換學(xué)習(xí)，回國前你想給住家媽媽Sarah寫封感謝信，告訴她你什么時候回國，為什么感謝她，以及你的感受。提示詞語： help, care, municate, drive to hospital, own family提示要點：When are you going to leave?Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?How do you feel?Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。文章可分為三段，第一段表明寫信的目的；第二段分析感謝的具體原因；第三段寫出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人稱來寫，時態(tài)主要用一般過去時和一般將來時。亮點分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.[高分句型一]I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English. 我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記，當(dāng)我用英語和別人交流困難時，你主動提出幫助我。句子中有when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣，這讓我想起了一句話：“天下之大, 家最美好。” 其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。16．（全國中考模擬）三年的初中生活接近尾聲，回首過去你充滿依戀，展望未來你豪情滿懷。請以The happy life為題寫一篇90詞左右的短文。要點如下：1. 校園生活豐富多彩，在寬敞明亮的教室里學(xué)習(xí)，老師和同學(xué)們都很友好，相處融洽，同學(xué)們互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)，雖然作業(yè)多，但一起學(xué)習(xí)很快樂。課余還經(jīng)常一起打球唱歌。2. 希望將來從事一份喜歡的工作，和父母分享成功，也為社會（society）多做有意義的事情。3. 現(xiàn)在必須努力學(xué)習(xí)，使夢想成真。 【答案】The happy lifeMy school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom with our lovely classmates. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful. We get on well with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. Though sometimes there is too much homework, with their help, we always finish it happily. During our free time, We play ball games and sing songs together. I wish to have a job I like and I will share my success with my parents. I also hope that I can do a lot of meaningful work for the society in the future. At present, I must study hard to make my dream e true. 【解析】英語作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。get on well with相處融洽；help each other and learn from each other互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)；with one’s help在某人的幫助下；in the future. 在未來；e true.（夢想）成真17．（山東中考模擬）書面表達年濟南市入選全國文明城市。為鞏固文明城市創(chuàng)建成果，共建美好濟南，濟南市團委正在開展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時應(yīng)該從以下幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。倡導(dǎo)低碳騎自行車或步行上學(xué)，注意節(jié)約……保護環(huán)境愛護花草，不亂扔垃圾…… 禮貌待人常說“謝謝”、“ 對不起”、“ 請”等禮貌語言……幫助他人助人為樂，積極參加志愿者活動……要求： 。，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.