【正文】 also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language.When I was young, I was interested in reading. So I have been good at writing since my childhood. How to read books? We can do something that follows.First, we should develop the habit of reading. Second, we must pay much attention to books we choose. Reading books do more good than harm to us. So let’s start reading more from now on!【解析】本文屬于話題作文，要表達(dá)閱讀的重要性。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如not only...but also..., one of+the 形容詞最高級+名詞復(fù)數(shù), be interested in, be good at, develop a good habit, pay attention to以及from now on等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。14．（北京中考模擬）假 如 你 是 李 華 ，為 慶 祝 6月 5日 世 界 環(huán) 境 日 ，你 們 學(xué) 校 組 織 主 題 為 “我 們 的 地 球 我 們 的 家園 （ One Earth One Family）”的 志 愿 者 活 動 ?請 你 寫 一 封 電 子 郵 件 給 外 教 Peter，邀 請 他 來 參 加活 動 ?主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :活 動 的 時(shí) 間 和 地 點(diǎn) ，你 們 準(zhǔn) 備 做 些 什 么 ，以 及 你 們 做 這 些 事 情 的 原 因 ?提 示 詞 語 :plant，recycle，speech，clean，beautiful提 示 問 題 :1. When and where will the activity be held?2. What will you do for it?3. Why will you do that?Dear Peter，I39。m writing to invite you to take part in our celebration of Environment Protection Day. Looking forward to seeing you there.Yours，Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，I39。m writing to invite you to take part in our celebration of Environment Protection Day.The celebration will be held in the Olympic Park at 2 pm on June 5.Our main activities will be planting trees and learning how to recycle. First，each student willbe given the chance to plant one tree. Planting trees helps keep the air clean and will also make ourcity more beautiful. Please prepare to get your hands dirty and dress accordingly. Our second activitywill be all about recycling. Our teacher，Mr. Parker will give us a speech about how to recycle andreuse in life at 4 pm. This will be a great opportunity to learn how to do it and e with an openmind.Environment Protection Day only es once a year，so I really hope you can attend ouractivities.Looking forward to seeing you there.Yours，Li Hua【解析】 假 如 你 是 李 華 ，為 慶 祝 6月 5日 世 界 環(huán) 境 日 ，你 們 學(xué) 校 組 織 主 題 為 “我 們 的 地 球 我 們 的 家園 （ One Earth One Family）”的 志 愿 者 活 動 ?請 你 寫 一 封 電 子 郵 件 給 外 教 Peter，邀 請 他 來 參 加活 動 ?主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :活 動 的 時(shí) 間 和 地 點(diǎn) ，你 們 準(zhǔn) 備 做 些 什 么 ，以 及 你 們 做 這 些 事 情 的 原 因 ?動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。 take part in參加； keep the air clean 保持空氣干凈15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)追星是青少年中普遍存在的問題。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)說明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。贊同，學(xué)習(xí)他們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，嚴(yán)格要求自己。，想到偶像會很開心。不贊同，浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、金錢和精力。，整天夢想成為明星。你的觀點(diǎn)…… （發(fā)揮12點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 條理清晰，語義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。3. 短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。4. 以…為榜樣： follow a good example of sb. 面對現(xiàn)實(shí): face realityNowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university people think teenagers should learn from stars and find their strengths and then they are strict with they are sad,it is fun to think ,they forget the pressure of learning.However, others think it is a waste of time and energy to chase stars. And it also affects their studies. They can’t face the reality and always dreams of being a famous star. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we bee useful persons in the future.【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：根據(jù)所給提示可知，本篇作文可以分三步進(jìn)行，首先分別列舉正反雙方的觀點(diǎn)，然后擺出自己的看法，并總結(jié)作為青少年的我們應(yīng)該怎么做。列舉觀點(diǎn)時(shí)要思路清晰，具有條理性。本篇作文，首先以Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university ，接著Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由，中間用到when以及also 這樣的詞使表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且具有連貫性。However, others think…用however轉(zhuǎn)折之后接著列出不贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由。然后In my opinion….巧妙運(yùn)用過渡語，列出自己的觀點(diǎn)。 We should….針對我們青少年應(yīng)該怎么做，給出自己的建議?？偨Y(jié)流暢自然，渾然天成。16．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）Writing.In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?Now please write a passage of about 80120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.【答案】First of all, twochild policy is the gift for some only some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry