【正文】 they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化；同時Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。14．（山東中考模擬）初中生活即將結(jié)束，學(xué)校英語俱樂部特邀你寫一篇英語短文,給七年級新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點建議。內(nèi)容要點如下：1. 初中科目更多，好的學(xué)習(xí)方法很重要；2. 鍛煉身體，保持健康；3. 參加社團活動，使學(xué)校生活豐富；4. 多讀書，多交朋友；5. 補充一兩點個人想法。注意：1. 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)：60－80；3. 內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4. 短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：method n. 方法　club n．社團　colorful Wele to our school!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，自己即將畢業(yè)，給七年級新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點建議。結(jié)合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，以第一人稱為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。用了短語和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來一些過渡詞或短語，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。15．（山東中考模擬）書面表達請務(wù)必將短文寫在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置！父母為我們付出了很多，你又做過哪些事情來表達自己的感恩之情呢？請敘述你為父母做過的一件事，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要? 1. 條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范整潔，100個詞左右。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地區(qū)、學(xué)校及姓名?！敬鸢浮縏here’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.【解析】考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。16．（湖南中考模擬）暑假即將來臨，許多學(xué)生喜歡下河游泳。為預(yù)防游泳溺水事故的發(fā)生，你們班將舉行以“珍愛生命，預(yù)防溺水”為主題的班會。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓Π踩斡镜慕ㄗh。建議內(nèi)容包括：不要到陌生的河流湖泊游泳；不允許擅自結(jié)伴游泳；不會游泳，不要下水救人……要求：1．語言通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。2．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。4．詞數(shù)：70詞左右。參考詞匯：alone without permission（未經(jīng)許可） allowask for help cherish（珍愛）Going Swimming Safely 【答案】Summer vacation is ing. Many students like going swimming in rivers or lakes. But how to swim safely? Here is my advice: Don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. We shouldn’t go swimming alone. We can’t swim with other students without permission. We are not allowed to swim without a parent. If we can’t swim, we mustn’t get into the water to save a person. Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.We live only once，we must cherish life.【解析】這是一篇談?wù)勀銓Π踩斡镜慕ㄗh。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。17．（西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）由于父母的溺愛，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情，導(dǎo)致獨立生活能力不強。請你根據(jù)以下建議；自己的事情自己做； 家里得事情幫著做； 學(xué)校的事情搶著做，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨立能力。要求；，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范2. 字數(shù)70 字左右（短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總字數(shù)） As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to makeus independent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?First, let39。s begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨立能力?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：it39。s very important for us to……, It’s our job to……, We can….., We should……, We sometimes need to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種