【正文】 80 years ago．Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers39。 hard work and personal charm．They hope that they can have more chances to join in different school activities．【解析】這篇作文以學校開放日為題，邀請家長來校聽課參觀，你作為志愿者參與了學校開放日活動。根據(jù)材料寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你帶領(lǐng)家長參觀美麗的校園，并一同觀看了升國旗儀式。2. 家長們聽了很多堂課，高度評價老師精湛的教學技能。3. 王芳老師的音樂課有趣而活躍，成功地融合了傳統(tǒng)和現(xiàn)代音樂。4. 張陽老師的歷史課把抗日戰(zhàn)爭栩栩如生呈現(xiàn)到課堂上，講述了七十年前中華兒女如何與日本鬼子勇敢戰(zhàn)斗。5. 家長們都感到……并希望……最后要點的內(nèi)容須用2到3句話展開合理想象，作適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進行合理的整理與安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。當然要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文連貫自然合理。15．（廣東中考模擬）書面表達以下圖畫呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。要求：。【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們仔細觀察圖片，弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情，用英語將這些內(nèi)容完整地敘述出來，并簡單陳述自己從中學到的東西。因此寫作前，要仔細看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。通過分析可知，這篇短文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。寫作時要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。還需注意的是英語表達和漢語的習慣不同，不能逐詞去翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用簡單句的基本句型，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。在文章中點綴幾個并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖片所傳達的信息，表述準確。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護樹木。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述，條理清晰。文章最后的兩句話也點明了文章的主題。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞用了過去式，尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動詞過去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。語法規(guī)范、準確。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。16．（全國中考模擬）現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點。請根據(jù)下表所給的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。字數(shù)90字左右，開頭已給出，不計入總字數(shù)。優(yōu)點方便，可以在家買東西，不受時間限制；有很大的商品信息，可以買到當?shù)貨]有的商品；價格較便宜。缺點實物和圖片有差距,質(zhì)量不保證；買貨容易退貨難；網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付不安全；你的觀點考生自擬（至少1點）提示詞：實物：material objectNow Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. 【答案】Now Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. It is convenient and you can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. There are so many goods online that it is easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. Besides, the price is much lower.However, “ Every coin has two sides.” So does Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, sometimes it’s not easy to give them back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.In my opinion, Internet shopping is easy and fast but we should be more careful.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點。要求用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。convenient 方便的；in one’s opinion按某人的觀點17．（四川中考模擬）書面表達目前，學生考試作弊現(xiàn)象嚴重，請圍繞以下要點談?wù)勂渲性蛞约皞€人建議。原因： 看法與建議：； ，學習發(fā)奮； 。 要求： 80100； ； ，不計入總字數(shù)。________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hardworking and they don39。t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven39。t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要就考試作弊這一主題展開討論。具體需要圍繞考試作弊的原因展開寫作，原因已經(jīng)給出來了，有以下幾點： 。寫完原因后還要提出自己的看法和建議，具體內(nèi)容也已給出：；，學習發(fā)奮；。寫作內(nèi)容上難度不大，需要把更多精力放在語言的準確性和文章的連貫性上面。寫作亮點：第一段總起描述了現(xiàn)在存在的作弊現(xiàn)象，用到了一些較好的短語，如picked up a bad habit（養(yǎng)成了一個壞習慣）。第二段對原因進行了闡述，借助了first，second，third等詞使得原因的陳述連貫起來。一些短語運用準確，如waste a lot of time playing games（浪費時間在玩游戲上），prepare for the exams（準備考試）。最后一段闡明了自己的看法（In my opinion），句式上面有創(chuàng)新，用到了一處倒裝句（only in this way can we improve our study and make progress），強調(diào)了不能作弊，只有以誠實和勤奮的方式我們才能進步。總體來說文章寫作較為流暢，有許多亮點。18．（江蘇中考模擬）寫作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動。為了倡導中學生接近大自然，某中學生英文報舉辦了一次征文活動，請你根據(jù)以下問題，用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.