【正文】 ing and never to give up. I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文內(nèi)容應包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如：try one’s best。 What’s more, feel proud of； in order to； give up ；keep on trying. ； It is important to keep on trying and never to give up等；so ；sothat等連詞的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。15．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，即將結(jié)束在美國的交換學習，回國前你想給住家媽媽Sarah寫封感謝信，告訴她你什么時候回國，為什么感謝她，以及你的感受。提示詞語： help, care, municate, drive to hospital, own family提示要點：When are you going to leave?Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?How do you feel?Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。文章可分為三段，第一段表明寫信的目的；第二段分析感謝的具體原因；第三段寫出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人稱來寫，時態(tài)主要用一般過去時和一般將來時。亮點分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.[高分句型一]I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English. 我永遠不會忘記，當我用英語和別人交流困難時，你主動提出幫助我。句子中有when引導的時間狀語從句。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣，這讓我想起了一句話：“天下之大, 家最美好?！?其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導的定語從句。16．（四川中考模擬）書面表達根據(jù)青少年讀書少的現(xiàn)象，請根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息，用英語寫一份向全校同學提出的倡議。讀書的意義獲取知識，增長見識，使人聰明，使人快樂，有助于學習，有助于成長。目前的狀況聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占去了學生大部分的讀書時間。發(fā)出倡議多讀書，讀好書。注意：詞數(shù)80左右；倡議書的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；倡議書須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，行文連貫，表達清楚。參考詞匯：gain knowledge獲取知識。 open the mind增長見識.My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life, Let’s start reading now!【答案】My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will do us good!Let’s start reading now!【解析】本文是一篇倡議書。要求根據(jù)青少年讀書少的現(xiàn)象，根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息，用英語寫一份向全校同學提出的倡議書。內(nèi)容包括讀書的意義、大部分學生目前的狀況、最后發(fā)出倡議。本文時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱用第一人稱。本文中給出的要點比較具體，考生需要把所提示的內(nèi)容逐條翻譯成英文，要涵蓋提示內(nèi)容的所有要點，同時注意理順要點，防止漏寫。寫作中可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，注意語句要通順，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系；同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，詞匯書寫無誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一，這樣會使文章更出色。17．（山東中考模擬）書面表達。現(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設美麗中國，實現(xiàn)中國夢而奮斗．請根據(jù)下列圖示，談談以下幾種職業(yè)怎樣做貢獻的．作為學生，你又該怎么辦？要求：短文需包含提示要點，并適當發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；語句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫規(guī)范；詞數(shù)：80詞左右．短文開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream． 【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設美麗中國，實現(xiàn)中國夢，農(nóng)民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學家怎樣做貢獻的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了為了實現(xiàn)中國夢，中國人正在努力做貢獻，接下來介紹農(nóng)民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學家如何做貢獻的，最后表示我們作為學生應該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。18．（北京中考模擬）作為初三畢業(yè)生，你們首次參加了“英語聽說機考”（the English Listening and Speaking Online Test）。你應邀為初一初二的學弟學妹們做聽說機考的經(jīng)驗介紹。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談談你對英語聽說機考有什么認識，在考試中需要做什么以及你想對他們提出哪些建議。提示詞語：necessary, answer questions, take notes, retell, read a passage aloud提示問題： What do you think of theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test? What do they need to do in the test?What suggestions do you want to give them?Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something about theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test with you.Thanks for listening!【答案】Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。 Speaking Online Test with you. I think it is necessary for us to take the listening and speaking test. In the test, you need to listen and choose the best answer and you will listen and answer the questions. Next, you’ll listen and take notes and then you will listen and retell the passage according to the notes. Finally, you’ll read a passage aloud. If