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文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名;(3)詞數(shù):80100;(4)短文開頭僅供參考,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文開頭:“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如hold a class meeting,talk about,the result of,keep healthy,after school,have more time to do,want to do,such as,listen to music,in favor of,clean the room,play tennis等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化;同時(shí)Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理,層次分明,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16.(廣東中考模擬)書面表達(dá)假如你是九年級(jí)一班的李新,你們的新外教Peter想去北京參觀故宮博物院,希望你能給他作一個(gè)大概的介紹。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示,用英語給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容:(the Forbidden City)的基本情況(又名……; 建于14061420;古代皇帝emperor 寢宮;……)(1987年UNESCO World Heritage;世界上最大的古代宮殿;……)。寫作要求:80詞左右;條理清楚,意思連貫,語句通順,標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。Dear Peter, I’m Li ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Xin【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li hear you are ing to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the all like think you will also like am looking forward to ing soon.Yours, Li Xin【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文,要求寫一封電子郵件給你的新外教Peter,向他介紹北京故宮博物院。給出的要點(diǎn)比較全面,只要稍加發(fā)揮想象即可。寫作時(shí)注意郵件的格式,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不要遺漏要點(diǎn),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容:(the Forbidden City)的基本情況(又名……; 建于14061420;古代皇帝emperor 寢宮;……)(1987年UNESCO World Heritage;世界上最大的古代宮殿;……)。點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作;在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后要檢查主題是否明確,表達(dá)方式是否恰當(dāng),所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求,語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。17.(云南中考模擬)書面表達(dá)I’d Like to Say “ ” to My 提示:即將畢業(yè)了,在你三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)和生活中,你有什么想要對(duì)家長(zhǎng)、老師或者朋友說?有歉意、有感謝,有懷念還是其它?請(qǐng)以 I’d Like to Say “ ” to My 為題,任選一位傾訴對(duì)象,用英語寫一篇文章,談一談你的想法。要求:、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔,詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè);、校名,否則以零分計(jì);3. 請(qǐng)將短文寫在答題卡上。寫在本試題卷上無效。【答案】I’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My TeacherHow time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always feel sorry for one thing in my heart. I’d like to say sorry to my English teacher, Mrs. Chen.When I began to learn English, I hated remembering new words. So I wasn’t good at English. Once I copied my deskmate’s paper during an English exam and handed it in. I got an “A”. Mrs. Chen didn’t know the truth and praised me in class. Now I still remember her words clearly, “ It’s a good beginning. I believe you will be better and better.” When I heard these words, I really felt regretful in my heart. I decided to tell Mrs. Chen the truth and say “sorry” to her after class. But I didn’t.Since then, I have tried my best to learn English well. And my English is being better and better. But I’d like to say sincerely. “ Sorry, Mrs. Chen.”【解析】這是一篇要求介紹你三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)和生活。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般過去時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。18.(重慶中考模擬)書面表達(dá)假設(shè)格林(Green) 先生是你班的一位外籍教師,在他回國前夕,學(xué)校將為他舉行歡送會(huì)。請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇?dú)g送辭,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:1. 格林先生是澳大利亞人,三年前來到我校教英語;2. 他與我們相處融洽,但對(duì)我們要求嚴(yán)格;3. 這些年來,…… 我們深表感激;4. 下星期他將離校回國,祝他一路順風(fēng)?!敬鸢浮縇adies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us. All these years he39。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如Ladies and Gentlemen,first of all,thank you for doing,give me a chance,be from,three years ago,get along with,be strict with,try his best to do,leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leav