【正文】 and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是：你們學校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來為?？陡?，談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個提綱，具體的寫作內容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來充實完成。因此首先我們要仔細思考這個問題，結合自己的真實生活，想一想平時是怎么做的，應該怎么做。這是寫作中的一個難點。另外一個難點是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達出來，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型，每個句子應以簡單句為基礎，如主謂賓結構或主系表結構，然后再變化成較高級、復雜是句型，如復合句、非謂語動詞形式等。另外還應注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整、充實。作者根據題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內容非常真實。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述，符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范，句式表達符合英語的習慣。文章中以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調整文章結構，使用復雜句型、短文和較高級的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。14．（山東中考模擬）寫作讀萬卷書,行萬里路。為幫助中小學生了解國情、熱愛祖國、開闊眼界、增長知識,提高社會責任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力,教育部倡導開展“研學旅行 （study tour）”活動。你校也計劃開展此項活動,但是有些學生表示歡迎,也有些表示反對。請你以 My Opinions onStudy Tour為題,寫一篇英語短文,談談你的看法并說明理由。要求,可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。、校名:80100（文章開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)）?？蓞⒖家韵略~匯the sense of social responsibility社會責任感。 creative spirit創(chuàng)新精神。 practical ability實踐能力My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forStudents 【答案】My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forstudents so that they can have a better understanding of life and students are crazy about such tours while others show their great concerns.Personally ,I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study of the time,studennts acquire knowledge and skills from walking out of the campus,they can learn through their own experiences and can understand better about what they have learned from textbooks. Besides,study tours contribute a lot to shaping a student’s life values and bee more confident in getting along with also helps students develop the sense of social responsibility, creative spirit and practical ability.Of course,we must put safety in the first place in the course of study tour,which is also the major concern of our parents and schools.【解析】1. 本題為話題作文，給定的話題為My Opinions on Study Tour. 研學旅行之我見。2. 寫出我們學校組織這次學習旅游的目的, 是讓學生對生活和社會有一個更好的了解。 3. 介紹學生對這次研學旅行的看法，有些學生表示歡迎，也有些表示反對。 4. 具體介紹本人的觀點。（1）對培養(yǎng)學生的學習興趣起著至關重要的作用。（2）可以通過自己的經驗和觀察來學習。（3）學習旅游有助于塑造學生的人生價值觀和個性，使他們更加自信地與他人相處，也有助于培養(yǎng)學生的社會責任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力。5. 最后要提出安全的要求。我們必須把安全放在第一位。 6. 時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。人稱較為靈活。 15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆發(fā)，據報道114個美國孩子在今年2月死于流感。流感季節(jié)我們應該如何保持健康呢？易患病人群老人和孩子原因1. 免疫系統(tǒng)弱；2. 流感知識缺乏：流感病毒引起流感；口、鼻、手傳播；公共場所人與人近距離傳播；3. …… （至少1點）預防措施1. 多鍛煉；2. 注意保暖；3. …… （至少1點）要求:1. 所寫內容必須包括提供的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮；2. 文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名等信息。參考詞匯：weaker immune systems （較弱的免疫系統(tǒng)）；influenza virus （流感病毒）The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. ____________________________________________________________________【答案】The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. The flu hits children and elderly people the hardest. This is because they have weaker immune system. It is easy for them to get the flu. In fact, most people don’t know much about the flu. The influenza virus causes the flu. The virus can get on your hands. If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu. Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public. How do we keep the flu away? We should get lots of rest and exercise. Put on enough clothes to keep warm. Take a shower every day and wash hands often. Remember if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如from to，every year，get the flu，in fact，get on，pay no attention to，spread from，person to person，in public，keep away，lots of，put on，take a shower，make sure，go to the hospital，as soon as possible等。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關系和情感態(tài)度）現(xiàn)在社會普遍對90后，00后有一些誤解， 認為他們自私、無禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學生，你又是怎么看待這個問題的呢? 請結合你自己和周圍同學的表現(xiàn)，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點和兩條不足之處進行描述。要求：，可適當發(fā)揮。【答案】As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can