【正文】 Third等時間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構(gòu)副詞的運用，既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明，還豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。12．（請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文。（2）年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日漸貧寒。（4）思汗勇于面對困難、主動承擔(dān)家務(wù)且刻苦學(xué)習(xí)。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。The Moving Story of He SihanRecently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He________________【答案】Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He has lived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in . Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By selling the pictures he painted, he raised money for his aunt to treat her disease. You can’t imagine what difficulties he faces, he never gives up. In addition, he offers to do all the housework. What’s more, though he is busy, he studies hard and gets good grades.I feel proud of him. Because he never gives up and tries his best to pay back his aunt, no matter how hard the life is.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，介紹何思汗的感人事跡。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如show great interest in, at that time, unfortunately, 比較級and比較級, raise money, give up, in addition, offer to do, what’s more, get good grades, feel proud of, pay back以及try one’s best等?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。北京中考模擬）為了幫助同學(xué)們樹立集體觀念和提高班級責(zé)任感，你校英文報刊正在以“ Building a Harmonious Class” （創(chuàng)建和諧班級）為題征文，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)劙嗉壋?員應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體，作為一名成員，你通常是怎么做的，以及還需要再做些什么。這是一篇開放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個提綱，具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來充實完成。這是寫作中的一個難點。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實。語法規(guī)范，句式表達符合英語的習(xí)慣。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。山東中考模擬）寫作讀萬卷書,行萬里路。你校也計劃開展此項活動,但是有些學(xué)生表示歡迎,也有些表示反對。要求,可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。可參考以下詞匯the sense of social responsibility社會責(zé)任感。 practical ability實踐能力My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forStudents 【答案】My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forstudents so that they can have a better understanding of life and students are crazy about such tours while others show their great concerns.Personally ,I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study of the time,studennts acquire knowledge and skills from walking out of the campus,they can learn through their own experiences and can understand better about what they have learned from textbooks. Besides,study tours contribute a lot to shaping a student’s life values and bee more confident in getting along with also helps students develop the sense of social responsibility, creative spirit and practical ability.Of course,we must put safety in the first place in the course of study tour,which is also the major concern of our parents and schools.【解析】1. 本題為話題作文，給定的話題為My Opinions on Study Tour. 研學(xué)旅行之我見。 3. 介紹學(xué)生對這次研學(xué)旅行的看法，有些學(xué)生表示歡迎，也有些表示反對。（1）對培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)興趣起著至關(guān)重要的作用。（3）學(xué)習(xí)旅游有助于塑造學(xué)生的人生價值觀和個性，使他們更加自信地與他人相處，也有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的社會責(zé)任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力。我們必須把安全放在第一位。人稱較為靈活。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆發(fā)，據(jù)報道114個美國孩子在今年2月死于流感。參考詞匯：weaker immune systems （較弱的免疫系統(tǒng)）；influenza virus （流感病毒）The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. ____________________________________________________________________【答案】The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. The flu hits children and elderly people the hardest. This is because they have weaker immune system. It is easy for them to get the flu. In fact, most people don’t know much about the flu. The influenza virus causes the flu. The virus can get on your hands. If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu. Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public. How do we keep the flu away? We should get lots of rest and exercise. Put on enough clothes to keep warm. Take a shower every day and wash hands often. Remember if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。16．（要求：，可適當發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us ca