【正文】 ly life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. 【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時承接短文開頭，具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。高分亮點：短語：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。8．為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個選題。內(nèi)容提示：1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點?！敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。9．你是一位九年級的學(xué)生李明，你用英語寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對你關(guān)心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習和生活情況。你認為自己學(xué)習上還要多花工夫。（舉例說明，適當發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。他們說（適當發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語句通順，意思連貫。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習和生活情況。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。10．書面表達為感受母愛情深，弘揚知恩圖報，某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以My參考詞匯：giveto…，It39。myto…，trybestMyMotherWelove．Weneedshowpersonloveisshow love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。s what she wants most，I think．【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。Mother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保