【正文】 ager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學參與討論，寫出他們的觀點及自己的觀點。因為是敘述同學的現(xiàn)在的觀點，所以句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述同學的觀點用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：do a survey about sth關于某事做調查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子?？键c：材料作文。16．（全國中考模擬）年春晚節(jié)目中相聲演員為大家講述姥姥的故事，展現(xiàn)家風家教的傳承，溫暖了每一個中國人的心。假如你叫Jack，你所在的小區(qū)正在進行“模范家庭”的評選活動，請根據(jù)下表提示的內容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。要 點推 薦 理 由家庭氛圍相互尊重；彼此關愛；……鄰里關系和睦相處；樂于幫助；……綠色生活保護環(huán)境；……公益活動志愿援助；……要求：1. 推薦信的內容必須包括所給要點，可適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)100字左右，開頭和結尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名和姓名。Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. 【答案】Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful.Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.Yours FaithfullyJack【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你所在的小區(qū)正在進行“模范家庭”的評選活動，請根據(jù)提示的內容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內容要求的句子。would like to do想做某事； respect each other 彼此尊重； get along well with sb與某人相處融洽；volunteer to help people in 17．（山東中考模擬）書面表達“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自創(chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來,淄博人民萬眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點贊的行為隨處可見。作為中學生,我們也做出了自己的努力。請根據(jù)以下所 給要點,寫一篇 100 詞左右的英語短文。；；；；（自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點）參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習慣于）queuing up （排隊） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what39。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內容，使語言表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。18．（靖江外國語學校中考模擬）書面表達根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文?；厩闆r張陽，陽光中學九年級二班學生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。每周花七個多小時閱讀各種類型的書，因為……。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個人為保護環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，并適當發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway c