【正文】 注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。16．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，二網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點(diǎn)，請參考下面的信息，并結(jié)合就的觀點(diǎn)些一短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。，可以在家買東西，不受時(shí)間限制。，可以買到當(dāng)?shù)貨]有的商品。價(jià)格較便宜。；實(shí)物和圖片有差距。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要寫一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來描述優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再用一段描述劣勢和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會(huì)條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。具體來說，每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)在陳述的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。寫作亮點(diǎn)：首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題Internet Shopping。第二段開始描述優(yōu)勢，這里用到了“無論什么時(shí)候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結(jié)構(gòu)，在表達(dá)“...是開放的”也很準(zhǔn)確，用了“be open”。比較級的應(yīng)用也相對準(zhǔn)確，例如cheaper。連詞的使用也是亮點(diǎn)，besides意為“除此之外”。在談到劣勢的時(shí)候引用了俗語“Every coin has two sides.”，是個(gè)亮點(diǎn)?！癢hat’s more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復(fù)，體現(xiàn)了文章語言的多樣性?？傮w來說要點(diǎn)均被提及，語言準(zhǔn)確富有活力。17．（重慶市育才中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。上周的一堂英語課上，老師就“二孩政策（ twochild policy ）”展開了全班調(diào)查。請你以“ Do you want to have a brother or a sister?” 為題目用英語寫一篇短文，先匯總班上同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)，再陳述自己的想法。觀點(diǎn)理由不想有弟妹，愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（21%）不愿意與別人分享父母的愛，父母會(huì)很辛苦，......想要弟妹，不愿意當(dāng)獨(dú)生子女（62%） 渴望有伴，有更多的親人，有人分享......不介意，都可以（17%） ……你的觀點(diǎn)……要求：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱，100字左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,__________________________【答案】Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Do you want to have a brother or a sister?Last week,we had a discussion about twochild students think they don’t want to have a brother or a sister. Because they don’t want to share parents’ love with , parents can be tired because of two children. However,others think they want to have a brother or a sister. Because they are eager for a person to play can share their happiness and sorrow.17% of students think they can’t mind having a brother or a should be decided by their parents.I think it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I can share everything with him or her.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇以“Do you want to have a brother or a sister?”為話題的調(diào)查報(bào)告，介紹同學(xué)們對“二孩政策（ twochild policy ）”不同的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述理由。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)表達(dá)。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和想法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。本文恰當(dāng)使用了had a discussion about，share parents’ love with，because of，play with, however，also, be good to等詞（組）。采用了豐富的句型，比如：原因狀語從句、I think賓語從句、被動(dòng)語態(tài)等多種句式交替運(yùn)用，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。18．（海南中考模擬）“美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護(hù)她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學(xué)生，請你寫一篇短文號召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)中來。要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語寫一篇短文，號召中學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面來敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱we來敘述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補(bǔ)充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個(gè)方面，對中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準(zhǔn)確，語句通順，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。19．（浙江中考模擬） 書面表達(dá)假如你叫Tom。你們學(xué)校正在開設(shè)國際課程，下個(gè)月將有新的外教來學(xué)校上課。以下是外教Rhian的微信，請根據(jù)該內(nèi)容回復(fù)一條90詞左右的短信，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 Hey, for your __________________________________