【正文】 ver give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.【解析】【詳解】幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來(lái)，這篇作文要求寫一寫自己的幸福觀，描述自己對(duì)于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過(guò)去的幸福往事的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，可以使用到的短語(yǔ)表達(dá)有：happiness is always around you 幸?？傇谀闵磉?；put your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數(shù)學(xué)考試成績(jī)很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見(jiàn)家長(zhǎng)；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難?？傮w來(lái)說(shuō)這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。14．（北京中考模擬）現(xiàn) 在 ，某 英 文 網(wǎng) 站 正 在 開(kāi) 展 以 “成 就 ”為 主 題 的 征 文 活 動(dòng) ?假 如 你 是 李 華 ，請(qǐng) 用 英 語(yǔ) 寫 一篇 短 文 投 稿 ?談 一 談 你 經(jīng) 歷 的 讓 你 很 有 成 就 感 的 一 件 事 情 ，主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :你 取 得 了 什 么 成就 ，你 是 如 何 做 到 的 ，以 及 你 在 取 得 成 就 的 過(guò) 程 中 學(xué) 到 了 什 么 ?提 示 詞 語(yǔ) :write，translate，friend，help，teamwork，better提 示 問(wèn) 題 :1. What achievement have you made?2. How did you make it?3. What have you learnt from the experience?【答案】Last year I wrote my own book of poetry. This book is special because I worked with a closeforeign friend to translate some Chinese poems into English，which was very challenging. In order tomake them better accepted and easier to understand，we collected lots of materials from the libraryand the Internet. It took me and my friend one year to translate them.During the process of translating the poems and working with my friend，I learned a lot aboutthe world around me and really got in touch with my soul. Furthermore，I think my English is betterthan it used to be. Most importantly，I learned the value of teamwork. My friend and I weredetermined to finish this huge task and that39。s exactly what we did. I feel so proud of my achievementand I hope I can publish my book soon.【解析】現(xiàn) 在 ，某 英 文 網(wǎng) 站 正 在 開(kāi) 展 以 “成 就 ”為 主 題 的 征 文 活 動(dòng) ?假 如 你 是 李 華 ，請(qǐng) 用 英 語(yǔ) 寫 一篇 短 文 投 稿 ?談 一 談 你 經(jīng) 歷 的 讓 你 很 有 成 就 感 的 一 件 事 情 ，主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :你 取 得 了 什 么 成就 ，你 是 如 何 做 到 的 ，以 及 你 在 取 得 成 就 的 過(guò) 程 中 學(xué) 到 了 什 么 ?話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語(yǔ)法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。 translate into 把翻譯成；in order to為了； used to do過(guò)去常常做某事15．（山西中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。學(xué)會(huì)分享很重要。你有哪些東西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義。要求： 80；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。【答案】It39。s very important to learn to share with each have many things to share in different example，I can share some beautiful pictures，my favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by ， which are widely I39。d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.Emily was lonely and I found her crying alone for some made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with we are good friends.In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，闡述分享的意義。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，make sb+形容詞，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。16．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和手機(jī)終端發(fā)展，成癮性網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲使一些中學(xué)生沉迷其中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步和身心健康。上周你們學(xué)校開(kāi)展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many puter games ”為主題的專題討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中的要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇短文，提出一些意見(jiàn)。學(xué)校要做些什么；，如運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，外出游玩等；, ……； 家長(zhǎng)要做些什么，多陪伴，……；，……；學(xué)生要做些什么……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意 ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)總詞數(shù)；；Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many puter games .The students have different opinions.【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many puter games. The students have different opinions. They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can municate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must e first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭。我們只要用英語(yǔ)正確的把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)就行。動(dòng)筆前要真人閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。根據(jù)題目要求，短文是一篇議論文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱。寫作中要注意適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文緊密聯(lián)系。符合邏輯關(guān)系。高分句型【1】They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他們認(rèn)為他們的學(xué)校可以開(kāi)班會(huì)，幫助他們認(rèn)識(shí)到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利與弊。動(dòng)詞不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the 。高分句型【2】Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school. 此外，學(xué)校應(yīng)該定期舉辦有益的校外活動(dòng)。此句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。其構(gòu)成為：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+及物動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞。高分句型【3】Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them. 與學(xué)校緊密合作是家長(zhǎng)幫助他們的另一重要途徑。動(dòng)名詞W