【正文】 but happy.【解析】【分析】這是一篇看圖作文，介紹我們在一次爬山過程中保護(hù)環(huán)境，撿拾垃圾?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We felt……，When we got to……，we cleaned……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們決定去爬山，接下來介紹我們在山頂上發(fā)現(xiàn)垃圾，然后撿拾垃圾，最后表達(dá)我們的感受。此處set off, get to, pick up, put...into…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。14．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá) 某英語教育網(wǎng)站正在舉辦有關(guān)分享的主題征文活動，請你根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷寫一篇題為“Sharing”的英語短文。注意：，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。SharingIt’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. 【答案】It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】此篇書面表達(dá)的話題是“分享”。首先我們根據(jù)給出的圖表確定要寫的內(nèi)容的提綱，包括：分享什么？為什么分享？怎么分享？然后根據(jù)每個提綱給出的一些關(guān)鍵詞，列出寫作要點及每個要點可能用到的表達(dá)，拓展思維，寫出自己的看法。最后，我們還要注意“分享”的情感教育，讓我們學(xué)有所獲。文章時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱主要用第一人稱。在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。15．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)越來越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活,改善了我們的生活,但同時也帶來了很多問題,如塞車和車禍,給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢?請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（80字左右）內(nèi)容包含：,如走人行道/過斑馬線。，讓短文通順，過渡自然。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.【解析】本文屬于給出一個主題，對這個主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述，談?wù)撚嘘P(guān)交通安全的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。實際上就是要求書寫一份倡議書。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。動筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充個人的觀點。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采?？赡苡玫降脑~組：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)追星是青少年中普遍存在的問題。請根據(jù)以下要點，同時說明你自己的觀點。贊同，學(xué)習(xí)他們的優(yōu)點，嚴(yán)格要求自己。，想到偶像會很開心。不贊同，浪費(fèi)時間、金錢和精力。，整天夢想成為明星。你的觀點…… （發(fā)揮12點）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 條理清晰，語義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。3. 短文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。4. 以…為榜樣： follow a good example of sb. 面對現(xiàn)實: face realityNowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university people think teenagers should learn from stars and find their strengths and then they are strict with they are sad,it is fun to think ,they forget the pressure of learning.However, others think it is a waste of time and energy to chase stars. And it also affects their studies. They can’t face the reality and always dreams of being a famous star. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we bee useful persons in the future.【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：根據(jù)所給提示可知，本篇作文可以分三步進(jìn)行，首先分別列舉正反雙方的觀點，然后擺出自己的看法，并總結(jié)作為青少年的我們應(yīng)該怎么做。列舉觀點時要思路清晰，具有條理性。本篇作文，首先以Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university ，接著Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人贊同的觀點及理由，中間用到when以及also 這樣的詞使表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且具有連貫性。However, others think…用however轉(zhuǎn)折之后接著列出不贊同的觀點及