【正文】 Helping others is helping ourselves.As a student, I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter es, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have bee close friends. I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.【解析】這是一篇關于學校正在開展“愛心傳遞，從我做起”主題教育活動，談談自己的看法；英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。It’s+形容詞+for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是怎樣的；make great progress 取得巨大進步14．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，在你的生活中一定有人給予你無私的愛和幫助。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展題為 The person I want to thank 征文比賽。請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內容包括：誰是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學到了什么？提示詞語: mother, busy, take care of, cook, encourage, help, love, hard提示問題:Who do you want to thank? Why do you want to thank him/her? What do you learn from him/her?The person I want to thank______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。要求以The person I want to thank為題寫一篇短文，內容包括：誰是你想要感謝的人？為什么你要感謝他（她）？你從他/身上學到了什么？根據(jù)所給出的材料內容可知本文時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱主要用第一人稱和第三人稱。在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。另外，可以用上一些句型、短語，較高級的語言，這樣會使文章更出色。最后必須認真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。15．（北京中考模擬）交流可以化解矛盾,增進友誼。當今交流方式很多，但人們之間的情感似乎越來越淡。學校英語專欄征文，主題是“Ways of Communication Today”。假如你是李華，你對此很感興趣，準備投稿，談談你日常的交流方式及你的感受。提示詞語： face to face， chatting on line， discuss，appear 提示問題：How many ways do you know to municate with others?How do you usually municate with your friends? Which is the best way and why?【答案】There are some ways to municate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls. I think the best way to municate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most wele and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, munication bees easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118） 【解析】這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如municate with others，such as，face to face，body and sign language，chatting on line，have a talk，each other，text messages，talk about，the best way，one of the most wele and useful inventions，easier and rapider，with the help of，keep in touch with，at any time and in any place等。而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to municate is the mobile ，使本文內容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時，可把提示的內容逐詞翻譯并拓展成不同的句子，最后把這些句子連在一起即可。16．（廣東中考模擬）書面表達假如你是九年級一班的李新，你們的新外教Peter想去北京參觀故宮博物院，希望你能給他作一個大概的介紹。請根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。要點內容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。寫作要求：80詞左右；條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確。Dear Peter, I’m Li ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Xin【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li hear you are ing to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the all like think you will also like am looking forward to ing soon.Yours, Li Xin【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一封電子郵件給你的新外教Peter，向他介紹北京故宮博物院。給出的要點比較全面，只要稍加發(fā)揮想象即可。寫作時注意郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。要點內容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作；在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要檢查主題是否明確，表達方式是否恰當，所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求，語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。17．（北京中考模擬）我區(qū)正在全力創(chuàng)建全國文明城區(qū)。假如你是李華，你打算邀請你們班交換生Peter參加下周日學校組織的志愿活動。請用英語寫一封邀請函，告訴他活動的時間和地點，活動內容以及需要做什么準備。提示詞語： Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, gloves, shoes 提示問題：When and where will you go?What will you do in this activity?What do you advise Peter to prepare for this activity?Dear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Li HuaDear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity.