【正文】 in the world. My best friend is Mary. When I am down, she lifts me up. When I lose my way, she guides me and cheer me on. So cherish your friend, Do not save your loving speeches for your friends. With the help of friends, your life is colourful.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，“ Friendship”為主題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勎易钫湟暤囊欢斡颜x。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I believe that……，F(xiàn)riendship is ……，F(xiàn)riends are……，When I lose……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了友誼的重要性，接下來介紹我的一段友誼，最后指出如何對待你的朋友。此處lift sb up, lose one’s way, cheer sb on, with the help of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。緊張的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束了，你即將迎來一個輕松的暑假。請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕募倨谟媱?。提示?. 好好休息，學(xué)會放松2. 讀書，因為讀書既有趣又能學(xué)到很多知識3. 陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務(wù)4. 參加社會活動，了解社會5. ……注意：～100；；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：知識 knowledge, 社會活動 social activities_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I39。m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I39。d like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall. I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。首先認(rèn)真審題和閱讀提示。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知此文時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來時。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，列好提綱（ a good rest and learn to relax myself；2. read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge；3. spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework；4. take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society；5. If possible, I39。d like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall.；6. I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.），不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。點睛：（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（2）根據(jù)內(nèi)容確定短文時態(tài)，學(xué)生要運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學(xué)的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點，及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。隨著連云港經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，而同時我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴(yán)重，去年我們經(jīng)歷了柳絮漫天飛舞以及數(shù)個霧霾天氣（hazy days），生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此，你班展開討論美麗連云港應(yīng)該從何做起，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點。連云港現(xiàn)狀美麗連云港從我做起未來展望①車輛越來越多②空氣越來越差③…….①出門坐公交，步行，騎車②……③…….①水更清，天更藍(lán)②……注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；；開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；。Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。s a worrying problem. Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem. I think there are many things we can do to help. We can take a bus, ride a bike or go somewhere on foot. What39。s more, more trees and grass should be planted to reduce the pollution.. If we try our best, I believe in the future we will have more clear days and clean rivers. Let39。s work together to make a difference to our homeland!【解析】寫作分析：這篇書面表達(dá)的背景是空氣污染越來越嚴(yán)重，生活環(huán)境在不斷惡化，需要完成的寫作任務(wù)是，描述連云港的現(xiàn)狀講一講如何從我做起建設(shè)美麗連云港對未來的結(jié)果進(jìn)行展望。需要注意的是正確使用相關(guān)短語表達(dá)和時態(tài)，尤其是在描述展望未來時需要借助將來時，各個部分之間要注意合理連接，保證文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言連貫。寫作亮點：文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出來了，于是可以開始正文的敘述，首先是描述現(xiàn)狀，用到的短語表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，例如too much traffic on the road道路上車輛過多，bees worse and ，does harm to our health對我們的健康有害，也用到了很實用的句型It has bee impossible for us to do…做…對于我們來說已經(jīng)變得不可能了。在銜接下一部分“采取措施”時，用了一句話過度，Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem.（因此，應(yīng)該采取行動來解決這個問題。），最后有對未來的展望，用到了條件句的主將從現(xiàn)，也用到了Let39。s work together to do讓我們一起來做…這樣的句型，總體來說文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，完成了要求的寫作任務(wù)。18．（河北中考模擬）為了讓同學(xué)們認(rèn)識到安全的重要性，網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行了一項安全問題調(diào)查。以下是100名 學(xué)生傷亡的原因，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語寫篇調(diào)查報告，就中學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)如何做好自我保 護(hù)這一問題談?wù)勀愕目捶āＲ螅?0詞左右。題目自擬，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。PercentageThe placeThe reason63%Streets or roadsCar accident18%Rivers or lakesSwimming without adults10%Food stalls （攤點）Unhealthy snacks9%School yardsInjury while playing or exercising____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Report on Children’s Injury and DeathRecently we did a survey among 100 students. They were injured or dead. The reasons are different. Here’s the result of our survey.Car accidents are the most dangerous. About 63 students were injured or died in the streets or on roads. And 18 students lost their lives in rivers or lakes while they were swimming without adults. 10 students were hurt because they had the unhealthy snacks at the little food stalls. 9 of them were injured in the school yard while playing or exercising.So we must pay more attention to road safety in daily life. Many