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【正文】 近他對(duì)母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫(xiě)信想了解該詩(shī)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信：：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；: 80100詞左右，信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文。【詳解】根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書(shū)信類文章。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：交代寫(xiě)信目的——朋友Jack熱愛(ài)中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語(yǔ)——如果對(duì)方有任何問(wèn)題，可以繼續(xù)問(wèn)自己，并期待收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。10．寫(xiě)作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題為“ A time when I made someone happy”，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件，內(nèi)容需包括以下要點(diǎn):1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右（題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）?！敬鸢浮縇ast summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural I arrived there,I couldn39。t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文，需要逐條完成要點(diǎn)問(wèn)題的回答，描述一次自己讓別人開(kāi)心快樂(lè)的經(jīng)歷，是一篇記敘文，首先要讀懂5個(gè)問(wèn)題，其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言和銜接手段把這五個(gè)問(wèn)題的回答聯(lián)系在一起，變成一篇短文，同時(shí)也要注意在描述過(guò)去的故事的時(shí)候要正確運(yùn)用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：既然這是一篇記敘文，就應(yīng)該完整地呈現(xiàn)故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明時(shí)間（Last summer），地點(diǎn)（in rural area），簡(jiǎn)要概括事件（teach children English），這是文章首句的點(diǎn)睛之筆，信息量豐富。短語(yǔ)和固定搭配的正確使用也為這篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（調(diào)整以適應(yīng)…），“as time went by”（隨著時(shí)間的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大進(jìn)步），“keep on learning”（繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)），“In a word”（總而言之）等等短語(yǔ)使用正確。在收尾部分表達(dá)了作者積極的人生態(tài)度，表示如果還有機(jī)會(huì)自己還樂(lè)于參與，這樣使得這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表意更加清晰。
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