【正文】 of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful． However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet． In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future． Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。同時(shí)First of all，/ Second，/ Third等時(shí)間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構(gòu)副詞的運(yùn)用，既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明，還豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。17．（北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，學(xué)校英語廣播站正在招募主持人。請(qǐng)你用英文給負(fù)責(zé)的老師 Sam 寫一封自薦信，內(nèi)容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及具體打算做的事情。提示詞語： like, improve, help, introduce, share提示問題： ● What’s your name and hobby?● Why do you want to be a host?● What are you going to do?Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station （英語廣播站）. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Huafrom Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs inmy spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my oralEnglish, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which theyare interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce somewestern culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautifulEnglish music and poems. I’d be very happy if I bee a host.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是圍繞一篇演講稿展開，貼近學(xué)校生活，學(xué)生有話可寫。但是在寫作上一定要注意審題，不要跑題或者偏題。要按要點(diǎn)和給出的提示問題來完成寫作任務(wù)，但不能生硬的寫幾個(gè)句子交待了事，切記，逐條生硬的翻譯，沒有任何的連接詞。在詞匯的運(yùn)用上，除了用自己熟悉的句型與詞匯外，注意句型的變化，連詞的使用使詞義連貫流暢，同時(shí)也使得文章有層次感，有條理性。注意高級(jí)句型的運(yùn)用提升文章的檔次。寫作亮點(diǎn)：文章開頭點(diǎn)明主題，表明目的，然后對(duì)自己進(jìn)行簡要的個(gè)人介紹。句型變化多，有定語從句的使用，數(shù)量恰當(dāng)，句式豐富，短語多樣。關(guān)于討論自己的競(jìng)選后的工作計(jì)劃，使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)（I am going to not only introduce some western culture…），有結(jié)尾，（I’m looking forward to your early reply.）體現(xiàn)了文章的完整性。18．（北京中考模擬）善待他人是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“團(tuán)結(jié)友善”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英文寫一篇短文投稿，說說你對(duì)善待他人的看法，你曾經(jīng)友善待人的經(jīng)歷，以及你的感受。提示詞語： important, help, happy提示問題： ● What do you think of being kind to others?● What did you do?● How do you feel?Being kind to others is a traditional virtue （美德） of Chinese people. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s veryimportant for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in theEnglish exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, Iencouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.【解析】試題分析：本題要求談?wù)剬?duì)善待他人的看法，曾經(jīng)友善待人的經(jīng)歷，以及你的感受。短文要覆蓋提示的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文中正確使用時(shí)態(tài)（過去時(shí)）來描述過去的經(jīng)歷以進(jìn)行表達(dá)，使用第一人稱形式進(jìn)行寫作。但也要注意在總結(jié)自己的感受，談?wù)撚^點(diǎn)的時(shí)候要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表明看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文開始就引入話題；提出了善待別人是傳統(tǒng)美德，借助動(dòng)名詞做主語（Being kind to others is…），之后介紹了一段自己的經(jīng)歷，表意清晰，中心明確，動(dòng)詞過去時(shí)使用正確。有幾個(gè)短語和結(jié)構(gòu)的使用堪稱亮點(diǎn)，如：so…that…。 give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，豐富的短語交錯(cuò)使用，使得故事表達(dá)清晰具體，切合主題，主旨鮮明突出。19．（山東中考模擬）寫作現(xiàn)在，戴眼鏡的學(xué)生越來越多，為此，國家把每年 6 月 6 日定為愛眼日。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的體會(huì)，就如何愛護(hù)眼睛，給校報(bào)英語欄目寫一篇短文。提示：1．吃有益于眼睛的食物，如胡蘿卜、雞蛋等；2．多做眼保健操，長時(shí)間用眼后可看看遠(yuǎn)方；3．養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習(xí)慣，如：不躺著玩手機(jī)或看書等。 要求：1．根據(jù)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；3．詞數(shù)90左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. ____________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to