【正文】 不足之處進(jìn)行描述。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。14．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)有沒有那么一件事是你一直想做的，但又因?yàn)榉N種原因遲遲未付諸行動(dòng)？也許是被擱置的新年愿望，或許是對(duì)父母的一句“我愛你”，抑或是一直沒有動(dòng)身前往的地方？請(qǐng)將“It’s never too late to ...”補(bǔ)充完整，并以此為題寫一篇英語作文。詞數(shù)：不少于100詞。要點(diǎn)：1. 寫一件讓你心心念念的事；2. 談?wù)勀阋恢毕胱鲞@件事，但沒能實(shí)現(xiàn)的原因；3. 談?wù)勀阆乱徊降挠?jì)劃。注意: ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、校名等相關(guān)信息?！敬鸢浮縄t’s never too late to fulfill my promiseMolly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise together. She said that she wanted to go to Hainan with me and see the beautiful scenery when we grow up. I happily agreed.Ten years had passed since I made that promise. However, I didn’t do anything about the promise because I was busy with my study. My mother also disagreed with me. “You should know study is the top priority （首要任務(wù)） for a student. You are just a teenage girl, there’s no way you can go there without an adult’s help.” I always felt upset when my mother said something like this.I talked to Molly about it. “My mother won’t allow me.” I sighed （嘆息）. “It’s a really long way. What should we do?” said Molly. “I don’t know.” I replied, “But we can make a plan by choosing a perfect time first.”“I’d like to set off when the summer holiday begins,” she said. “We can go there with both our parents. I want us to go there together. Just the way I have promised you.” I said.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，將“It’s never too late to ...”補(bǔ)充完整，并以此為題寫一篇英語作文。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Molly and I used to……，She said that……，I didn’t do……，I talked to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想長大了去海南看美麗的風(fēng)景，接下來介紹我一直想做這件事，但沒能實(shí)現(xiàn)的原因，最后介紹我下一步的計(jì)劃。此處used to do sth, want to do sth, grow up, be busy with, by doing sth, set off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（四川中考模擬）（題文） 書面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上，出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定時(shí)做飯、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運(yùn)動(dòng)；3. 處理緊急情況（如：撥打120）假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者，請(qǐng)你介紹這個(gè)產(chǎn)品，并談?wù)勀愕奈磥碓O(shè)想。要求：1. 意思連貫，語句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 3. 參考詞匯： at a fixed time 定時(shí)emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。隨著連云港經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，而同時(shí)我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴(yán)重，去年我們經(jīng)歷了柳絮漫天飛舞以及數(shù)個(gè)霧霾天氣（hazy days），生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此，你班展開討論美麗連云港應(yīng)該從何做起，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。連云港現(xiàn)狀美麗連云港從我做起未來展望①車輛越來越多②空氣越來越差③…….①出門坐公交，步行，騎車②……③…….①水更清，天更藍(lán)②……注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；；開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；。Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。s a worrying problem. Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem. I think there are many things we can do to help. We can take a bus, ride a bike or go somewhere on foot. What39。s more, more trees and grass should be planted to reduce the pollution.. If we try our best, I believe in the future we will have more clear days and clean rivers. Let39。s work together to make a difference to our homeland!【解析】寫作分析：這篇書面表達(dá)的背景是空氣污染越來越嚴(yán)重，生活環(huán)境在不斷惡化，需要完成的寫作任務(wù)是，描述連云港的現(xiàn)狀講一講如何從我做起建設(shè)美麗連云港對(duì)未來的結(jié)果進(jìn)行展望。需要注意的是正確使用相關(guān)短語表達(dá)和時(shí)態(tài)，尤其是在描述展望未來時(shí)需要借助將來時(shí)，各個(gè)部分之間要注意合理連接，保證文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言連貫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：文章的