【正文】 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.【解析】試題分析：本文以＂遇見美＂為主題的短文，談?wù)勆钪杏鲆娒赖囊淮谓?jīng)歷，所以句子的主語是第一人稱單數(shù)，句子的謂語動(dòng)詞用一般過去時(shí)，要注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要注意上下文的銜接，用自己熟悉的短語和句式。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give ；用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the 。15．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)筆友 Jim 一周前給你發(fā)了電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的旅游計(jì)劃及其他安排， 但由于某種原因你沒有及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件： 沒有及時(shí)回復(fù)的原因, 你打算去哪兒旅游，以及你暑假的其他安排。提示詞語: exams, go on a trip， volunteer， visit some museums提示問題： ? Why didn’t you reply to Jim’s in time?? Where do you plan to travel?? What are your other plans for the summer holiday?To: JimFrom: Li HuaSubject: A planDear Jim,I39。m terribly sorry I couldn39。t reply to your in time because __________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear JimI39。m terribly sorry I couldn39。t reply to your in time because I was busy preparing for theexams.I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. I promiseto send you some wonderful photos then.I’m going to do something meaningful during the ing summer holiday. First, I plan to dosome volunteer work in my munity. Second, I’ll visit some museums to learn moreknowledge.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的美國(guó)筆友Jim寫信，內(nèi)容包括：你沒有及時(shí)回復(fù)他的郵件的原因；你暑假打算去哪里旅行以及暑假里的其他安排。寫作時(shí)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)題目給出的這些內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，組織語言，表達(dá)清楚。首先應(yīng)注意內(nèi)容的完整，要包含題目中要求的所有要點(diǎn)，題目只是列出了一個(gè)提綱，沒有規(guī)定要學(xué)生寫什么，因此具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己來發(fā)揮，理由要充分、合理，暑假安排要符合日常生活和學(xué)生的身份。其次注意使用正確的英語句式來表達(dá)。通過分析可知，這篇短文講的是暑假的計(jì)劃，應(yīng)主要使用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，be going to結(jié)構(gòu)或者will+動(dòng)詞原形都可以。保證句式準(zhǔn)確，注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯。使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，點(diǎn)綴并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使上下文意連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)。短文共分三段，第一段介紹了自己沒有及時(shí)回復(fù)郵件的原因，用了一句話簡(jiǎn)潔、明了。第二段介紹的是自己的旅行計(jì)劃；第三段是暑假的其他安排。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理，層次清晰，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。文章中簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，句式不單調(diào)，有節(jié)奏感。如I39。m terribly sorry I couldn39。t reply to your in time because I was busy preparing for the ，使用了賓語從句和原因狀語從句；再如I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of 。還有一些較好的句型和短語，如be busy doing sth, promise to do sth., do something meaningful, plan to do learn more knowledge等等。整篇文章表達(dá)流暢，意思連貫。16．（河北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你叫李華,你的筆友Peter 想了解你日常生活中的榜樣? 請(qǐng)你以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,根據(jù)下列提示給他寫一封郵件?提示:1. Who is your role model in your daily life?2. Why do you consider him/ her as your role model?3. How do you feel to have him/ her as your role model?注意:1. 短文必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名,校名和地名。3. 詞數(shù):80個(gè)左右?（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）To: PeterFrom: Li Hua Subject: A Role Model in My Daily LifeHi! Peter,How is it going? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua 【答案】How is it going ? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, my role model in my daily life is my teacher, Mr. Green. He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. He is patient with all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. He is like a father to us. Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I’m proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up. Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,給我的筆友Peter 寫信，介紹我日常生活中的榜樣。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is……，He teaches us how to……，Mr. Green sets a good example for……，I hope to be……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我日常生活中的榜樣是格林先生，接下來介紹為什么格林先生是我的榜樣，最后我希望長(zhǎng)大后像他一樣。此處be friendly to, be patient with, try to do sth, teach sb sth, help sb do sth, be like, set a good example for sb, hope to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)在中國(guó)歷史上，書籍一直傳承著人類的文明。然而隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，國(guó)民尤其是青少年對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的癡迷，使得閱讀漸漸地退出中學(xué)生的生活。就“如何在學(xué)生中開展閱讀活動(dòng)”, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語小短文。提示：。：①在圖書館閱讀。 ②在班級(jí)建立圖書角。③同學(xué)間互借。