【正文】 rs39。 excellent teaching skills．The music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting．She successfully brought traditional music and modern music together．The history lesson given by Zhang Yang brought the AntiJapanese War alive in class．He told us how Chinese people fought against Japanese bravely 80 years ago．Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers39。 hard work and personal charm．They hope that they can have more chances to join in different school activities．【解析】這篇作文以學(xué)校開放日為題，邀請家長來校聽課參觀，你作為志愿者參與了學(xué)校開放日活動。根據(jù)材料寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你帶領(lǐng)家長參觀美麗的校園，并一同觀看了升國旗儀式。2. 家長們聽了很多堂課，高度評價老師精湛的教學(xué)技能。3. 王芳老師的音樂課有趣而活躍，成功地融合了傳統(tǒng)和現(xiàn)代音樂。4. 張陽老師的歷史課把抗日戰(zhàn)爭栩栩如生呈現(xiàn)到課堂上，講述了七十年前中華兒女如何與日本鬼子勇敢戰(zhàn)斗。5. 家長們都感到……并希望……最后要點的內(nèi)容須用2到3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進行合理的整理與安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。當(dāng)然要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文連貫自然合理。16．（北京中考模擬）友誼是焦渴時的甘泉， 黑暗中的明燈； 友誼是快樂時的分享， 憂傷時的撫慰……某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展“ Friendship”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阕钫湟暤囊欢斡颜x，主要內(nèi)容包括：你最好的朋友是誰，你們?nèi)绾纬蔀楹门笥训模约澳銥槭裁凑湟暷銈冎g的友誼。提示詞語：in trouble, help, encourage, together, treasure, happy提示問題：Who is your best friend?How did you bee best friends?Why do you treasure the friendship between you?As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As teenagers, I believe that everyone needs life without a friend is a life without the sun. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyone39。s life. Friends are your part of life. Friends make you believe that there really is good in the world. My best friend is Mary. When I am down, she lifts me up. When I lose my way, she guides me and cheer me on. So cherish your friend, Do not save your loving speeches for your friends. With the help of friends, your life is colourful.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，“ Friendship”為主題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勎易钫湟暤囊欢斡颜x。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I believe that……，F(xiàn)riendship is ……，F(xiàn)riends are……，When I lose……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了友誼的重要性，接下來介紹我的一段友誼，最后指出如何對待你的朋友。此處lift sb up, lose one’s way, cheer sb on, with the help of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。17．（山西農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)附屬學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達社會需要愛，時代呼喚愛。對善行、對愛心的感動，存在于每個人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感動，而是一種顯示感動的勇氣。請為你身邊的人或事點贊，讓“點贊”成為傳遞正能量的一種行動吧！是什么行為讓你點贊？講述一件你點贊的事情。你從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么？讓我們一起分享吧！請根據(jù)以下提示要點，寫一篇文章。注意：1．詞數(shù)：80左右；2．不要出現(xiàn)真實的人名及校名。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “l(fā)ike” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，講述一件我點贊的事情，我從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要點贊的人，接下來介紹他的情況，最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的東西。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。18．（全國中考模擬）共享單車（shared bikes）在廈門投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，它是國民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀英文報》寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢，出行方便，減少污染，負擔(dān)得起存在問題你的觀點我認為……（考生自擬，至少2點）注意事項:，要求語句通順，意思連貫?！澳愕挠^點”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀英文報》投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。前兩個內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達，而自己的觀點則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達出來，要求至少兩點。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達流暢。用到的短語有reduce pollution 減少污染；What39。s more 此外，take up 占據(jù)，in our way擋我們的路，living a green life 過綠色生活?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達流暢。19．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達生活中總有一些事情讓人覺得無奈，被人誤解、考試失利、遭遇逆境等。請以“There is always hope ”為題，寫一篇你的親身經(jīng)歷及感受。 What’s your feeling? What did you learn from it?提示：①詞數(shù)不少于70詞 ②可適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)使行文更加流暢 ③文中請勿提及真實的姓名和校名。___________________