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的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么?3. 你認(rèn)為使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么?要求:1. 不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名;2. 語意連貫,詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,談?wù)勎覍ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:there are……,I prefer to……,Mobile phones bring……,we can……,we should……,So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些;接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么,以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么;最后呼吁號召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16.(全國中考模擬)現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物,網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢,網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點(diǎn)。請根據(jù)下表所給的提示,用英語寫一篇短文,并發(fā)表你的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)90字左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。優(yōu)點(diǎn)方便,可以在家買東西,不受時(shí)間限制;有很大的商品信息,可以買到當(dāng)?shù)貨]有的商品;價(jià)格較便宜。缺點(diǎn)實(shí)物和圖片有差距,質(zhì)量不保證;買貨容易退貨難;網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付不安全;你的觀點(diǎn)考生自擬(至少1點(diǎn))提示詞:實(shí)物:material objectNow Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. 【答案】Now Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. It is convenient and you can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. There are so many goods online that it is easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. Besides, the price is much lower.However, “ Every coin has two sides.” So does Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, sometimes it’s not easy to give them back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.In my opinion, Internet shopping is easy and fast but we should be more careful.【解析】 這是一篇圖表,現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物,網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢,網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點(diǎn)。要求用英語寫一篇短文,并發(fā)表你的看法。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。convenient 方便的;in one’s opinion按某人的觀點(diǎn)17.(湖北中考模擬)書面表達(dá)隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的不斷發(fā)展,傳統(tǒng)的學(xué)習(xí)模式受到?jīng)_擊?!熬W(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)(online learning)”這一新的學(xué)習(xí)模式備受青睞。假設(shè)你是陳欣,最近某英文雜志正在討論中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行在線學(xué)習(xí)。以下是你所在班級的討論情況,請你給該報(bào)投稿,反映討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕āL崾荆河^點(diǎn)贊成反對理由1. 網(wǎng)上資源(resource)豐富2. 可以自由(freedom)選擇學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和時(shí)間1. 網(wǎng)上信息太多,有些不真實(shí)2. 長時(shí)間用電腦對眼睛不好要求:詞數(shù)不少于80詞,稿件的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。向子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,要點(diǎn)齊全,內(nèi)容合理,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫;文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)以“網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)(online learning)”為話題,結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息,闡述網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn):本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。文中more convenient,is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ,however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞(組)恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密;文中還多處使用了賓語從句、讓步狀語從句、動名詞作主語等句式,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,值得學(xué)習(xí)。18.(長沙麓山國際實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校中考模擬)書面表達(dá) 75. 初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想要求:(1)應(yīng)包含以上全部的信息,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使條理清楚、行文連貫;(2)詞數(shù):80字左右(3)短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。_____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________