【正文】 ed to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。9．假如你是李華，你們學校準備組織學生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準備什么。提示詞語： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題： ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點評：文章采取郵件格式，時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構，語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。句型：not only…but also；You39。d better …；I39。m looking forward to…。10．中學生在成長過程中經(jīng)常會碰到一些煩惱。假設你是李華，請根據(jù)下表提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。你的煩惱你的做法個頭不高，相貌平常不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少學會溝通，友善待人學習壓力大，課外活動少……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點）要求：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。要求從個人外貌特點、與人溝通及學習壓力等方面進行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作亮點：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談談我的煩惱及怎樣處理他們；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學習上的壓力幾方面分別談論自己的煩惱及處理的方式，生動具體，條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補、作定語、作賓語用得準確恰當；and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡捷生動。【考點定位】 考查提綱類作文。