【正文】 作亮點(diǎn)：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對(duì)于城市A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。對(duì)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)則重點(diǎn)突出，因?yàn)樵诔鞘蠥可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。在比較的時(shí)候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時(shí)，直接用比較級(jí)“higher”在說旅館時(shí)用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時(shí)，用了“as…as”等。在說選擇城市A的原因時(shí)，用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。9．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語言要通順，表達(dá)要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語單詞。文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。【答案】One possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文10．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80100詞． 豐富的校本課程可以讓你的生活更精彩．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖示中所提供的特色課程，按內(nèi)容及要求，用英文完成寫作．內(nèi)容包括：1．Whichcourse（s）doyoulike？2．Whydoyoulikeit/them？3．Whatcanyoulearnfromit/them？寫作要求：1．依據(jù)你的興趣選擇課程（數(shù)量不限）；2．短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名及姓名． Ofallthecourses，Ilike __________________________．【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。本題屬于材料作文，主要講述你喜歡的學(xué)科、原因以及你從你選擇的學(xué)科中學(xué)到了什么。注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用，靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語和句型。切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章，很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。條理清晰。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學(xué)科（體育、剪紙和廚藝），并解釋愿意以及收獲，最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對(duì)他的生活的意義。：單詞短語：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時(shí)，形容詞放后面。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語從句?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時(shí)，形容詞放后面等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。