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》“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers(追夢(mèng)人).”P(pán)resident Xi Jingping以上材料告訴我們:生活是豐富多彩的,有快樂(lè)幸福也有傷心失落。但既然選擇了遠(yuǎn)方,便只顧風(fēng)雨兼程。所以在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中,我們要滿(mǎn)懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢(mèng)想。請(qǐng)以Dream Chaser為題,談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)提示:,并努力讓它成為現(xiàn)實(shí);,使自己不斷強(qiáng)大;,積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng);。寫(xiě)作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫; ,字跡工整,詞數(shù)不少于80;,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);。Dream ChaserAs we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇材料作文。主要說(shuō)明要有自己的目標(biāo),努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí),使自己不斷強(qiáng)大;正確面對(duì)困難,積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。:例文用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述主要內(nèi)容;時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,主要講述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)(Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…)。承接文章開(kāi)頭,句意完整,避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ),敘述條理清晰。:高分短語(yǔ):feel satisfied;feel upset;e true;set a practical goal;both…and…;keep patient。高分句型:It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.;there be句型;祈使句;need to do sth.。10.同學(xué)們,初中生活即將結(jié)束,本次考試后,盼望已久的假期就要到來(lái)!請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,制定出度假計(jì)劃,可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際發(fā)揮。 寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容:,享受大自然的美景,放松心情。,幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。 寫(xiě)作要求: 詞左右,開(kāi)頭部分已給出,但不計(jì)入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。;要點(diǎn)齊全;句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫;書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析:短文要制定出度假計(jì)劃,文章需要用第一人稱(chēng)“I”進(jìn)行書(shū)寫(xiě),不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱(chēng)。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書(shū)寫(xiě),主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。所寫(xiě)的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法,不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式,如:e to an end結(jié)束;on the way在途中;get close to nature親近大自然;volunteer to do something自愿做某事;help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事;take part in sth參加活動(dòng)。用了一些銜接詞besides等,句子過(guò)度自然。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句,增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)??键c(diǎn):考查提綱作文。