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【正文】 agic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過(guò)微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館，接下來(lái)介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?，最后指出我們要在何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．書(shū)面表達(dá)為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動(dòng)，你們班開(kāi)展了一次主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。常 識(shí)歷史悠久，深受喜愛(ài)世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬（至少1點(diǎn)）偶 像梅西，有足球天賦夢(mèng) 想考生自擬（至少1點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 footballthemed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．Thank you for your attention．【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確本文主要從三個(gè)方面來(lái)寫(xiě)：介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)及其好處；說(shuō)說(shuō)自己的偶像；談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文語(yǔ)言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡(jiǎn)潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時(shí)，本文用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)、不定式作表語(yǔ)等等語(yǔ)法形式，使表達(dá)生動(dòng)；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。10．李華的英國(guó)筆友Jessica來(lái)信說(shuō), 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華, 請(qǐng)你給Jessica寫(xiě)一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn)：1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。要求：〔開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；, 意思連貫, 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。Dear Jessica, I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作是以書(shū)信的方式向筆友介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫(xiě)中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫(xiě)我最期待的活動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。
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