【正文】 ______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Dear Friends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will bee.However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.Let’s start reading now. And let it bee a part of our life!Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如not only…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the ，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。15．（天津中考模擬）書面表達班里同學(xué)成績有好有差，對于學(xué)習(xí)成績好的同學(xué)是否愿意和學(xué)習(xí)成績差的同學(xué)坐在一起呢？我們看看李磊是怎么做的呢，請同學(xué)們按照以下內(nèi)容要點記敘這件事并發(fā)表你的觀點。1. 李磊的學(xué)習(xí)成績非常好，樂于助人，和班里每個同學(xué)都相處融洽2. 上周，班里新來了一個同學(xué)叫做王剛，張老師讓他坐在李磊旁邊。3. 王剛成績不好，上課愛說話惹老師生氣。很多人不愿意和他做朋友。4. 但是李磊幫他學(xué)習(xí)，并且阻止他上課亂說話過了一段時間他們共同取得了進步。5. 如果你的身邊有王剛這樣的 slower student，你會怎么做？注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右，短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文需包括表中所有要點，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；3. 參考詞匯：成績差的學(xué)生： a slower student；使老師生氣 make sb. angry 亂說話 talk nonsenseLi Lei is a very good student。 He is _________________________________________________【答案】Li Lei is a very good student. He is good at studying and ready to help others so he gets on well with his classmates.Last week a new student called Wang Gang came to his class and Mr. Zhang made him sit next to Li Lei. But Wang Gang is weak in learning and loves talking in class. This made teachers angry Some of the students wouldn’t like to make friends with him. But Li Lei helps him study and stops him talking nonsense in class. After some time, they made great progress together.If I share a desk with this slow student like Wang Gang, I will help him patiently and learn from each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，介紹李磊如何幫助差生王剛以及如果你的身邊有和王剛一樣的差生，你會如何做。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be good at, be ready to do, get on well with, be weak in, make friends with, make great progress, share with, learn from以及過去分詞作后置定語。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。16．（湖北中考模擬）學(xué)會自我保護是青少年需要具備的一種意識和能力。請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合自己的觀點，以＂How Can We Protect Ourselves?＂為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文，談?wù)勗谏钪星嗌倌陸?yīng)該怎樣自我保護（selfprotection）。提示：1. never swim alone。2. be careful to make friends。3. call the police when you are in danger。4. eat healthy food。5. don’t crowd（go upstairs and downstairs）. 要求：1. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名、地名。How Can We Protect Ourselves?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves?Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is ing, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.【解析】這篇作文要求我們以How can we protect ourselves為題，談一談青少年在日常生活中應(yīng)該如何保護自己。這是一篇話題作文，文章中只給出了寫作的題目，而未給出具體的內(nèi)容，因此首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)結(jié)合自己的日常生活，發(fā)揮想象力，先列出文章具體內(nèi)容的提綱，然后根據(jù)題綱來組織語言，最后成文。這樣的題目是有點難度的，但也一定程度上放開了學(xué)生的思維，學(xué)生們可以根據(jù)自己所想來寫作，而不用受到內(nèi)容的限制。寫之前，要注意確定文章應(yīng)使用的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇作文應(yīng)以第一人稱we為主，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述。注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，以主謂賓和主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，寫出正確的句子，然后為提升文章檔次，使用幾個較復(fù)雜的句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語動詞、被動結(jié)構(gòu)等等。還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接，使用一些短語、副詞等，使整篇文章意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，并且內(nèi)容充實、完整，表達清楚、明了。作者從三個方面講述了自己的看法，這幾個方面都非常符合實際，所提建議很合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)、第一人稱為主，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。文章里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves ；再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.中非謂語動詞的使用。文章各部分之間使用了較好的連接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，這些詞匯和短語的使用讓文章具有連貫性。17．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，在你的生活中一定有人給予你無私的愛和幫助。某英文網(wǎng)站正在