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_____________________【答案】Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. And it has changed a lot. In the past, lots of rubbish could be seen around us. Thanks to the campaign, the streets look much cleaner now. What’s more, there used to be many people breaking the traffic rules. But now we can find more policemen in the streets who warn people to obey traffic rules and the traffic is no longer in a mess. As students we are supposed to follow the traffic rules strictly. Besides we can serve as volunteers to help clean the city. With everybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動(dòng),要求談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。?dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。15.(全國中考模擬)年春晚節(jié)目中相聲演員為大家講述姥姥的故事,展現(xiàn)家風(fēng)家教的傳承,溫暖了每一個(gè)中國人的心。假如你叫Jack,你所在的小區(qū)正在進(jìn)行“模范家庭”的評(píng)選活動(dòng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示的內(nèi)容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。要 點(diǎn)推 薦 理 由家庭氛圍相互尊重;彼此關(guān)愛;……鄰里關(guān)系和睦相處;樂于幫助;……綠色生活保護(hù)環(huán)境;……公益活動(dòng)志愿援助;……要求:1. 推薦信的內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)100字左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名和姓名。Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. 【答案】Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful.Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.Yours FaithfullyJack【解析】 這是一篇圖表,你所在的小區(qū)正在進(jìn)行“模范家庭”的評(píng)選活動(dòng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,寫出的句子要達(dá)意,完整,語法正確,合乎習(xí)慣,特別是句式,謂語動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù),選用比較有把握的詞匯,用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。would like to do想做某事; respect each other 彼此尊重; get along well with sb與某人相處融洽;volunteer to help people in 16.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲,你一定既有收獲又有不足,也有許多對(duì)自己未來的期待。請(qǐng)以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題,根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖,寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對(duì)未來的期盼。注意:。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題,結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息,闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn):本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,要點(diǎn)齊全,語言簡練。文中 not only …but also…,help a lot,share happiness and sadness,do well in,give up, besides,so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.,therefore, be proud of等詞(組)恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密;文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法,使文章增色不少,值得學(xué)習(xí)。17.(天津中考模擬)書面表達(dá) 假設(shè)你叫李明,曾榮幸成為天津國際馬拉松賽的一名志愿者。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),用英文寫一篇演講稿,談?wù)勥@一段美好的經(jīng)歷。(1)年4月國際馬拉松賽在天津舉行;(2)作為志愿者,賽前接受了培訓(xùn);(3)在閑暇時(shí)間里,和運(yùn)動(dòng)員用英語交談,為他們提供幫助;(4)和許多運(yùn)動(dòng)員成為了朋友,也了解了許多不同的文化;(5)你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯:志愿者 volunteer要求:(1)詞數(shù):80~100個(gè)。(2)演講稿的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全,行文連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,.Before the game, volunteers were given a training. In our spare time, we talked to the athletes in English to help we are friends with many the same time,we also learn about many different cultures.I think the experience is good for me.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如be glad to do,talk about,Tianj