【文章內容簡介】 u will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學好漢語，題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知，這是要求寫一封建議信，內容應包括以下幾個方面：首先應和Sam先做一個交流，然后引出寫信的目的；接下來給出具體的建議，依據題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語表達出來，還應注意補充一些內容，使文章更加充實；最后寫一個適當的結尾，如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應使用一般現在時，根據表達需要使用恰當的人稱。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子的整體結構考慮，寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結構或主系表結構為主，簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復合句以及其他一些復雜句式。語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對他的漢語學習提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學習漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，句式結構符合英語的表達習慣。語法規(guī)范、準確，用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡單句結構為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調整了文章的結構。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。8．（陜西西北工業(yè)大學附屬中學中考模擬）當代雷鋒郭明義，在《幸福就這么簡單》一書中，用自己的點滴平凡小事詮釋出幸福的 真諦。幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來。那你的幸福觀又是什么 呢？請以 My Happiness 為題寫一篇短文。內容包括以下方面：1. 你認為幸福是什么？2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代時間、地點、過程與感受）。3. 以自己的感悟揭示：應該如何創(chuàng)造幸福。 寫作要求：1. 短文結構完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法準確，符合邏輯；2. 卷面干凈整潔；3. 詞數 80 左右；4. 開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。My Happiness After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for me,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.【解析】【詳解】幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來，這篇作文要求寫一寫自己的幸福觀，描述自己對于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談談應該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過去的幸福往事的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài)，可以使用到的短語表達有：happiness is always around you 幸?？傇谀闵磉叄籶ut your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數學考試成績很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見家長；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難。總體來說這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫作任務。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學們，請奉獻你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻。某英文網站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談生活中你對他人提供善意幫助的經歷。主要內容包括:你對友善行為的認識和理解，你平時做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談談生活中你對他人提供善意幫助的經歷。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達為了解學生們的職業(yè)觀，班主任以我的理想職業(yè)為主題在全班做了調查。請你根據表格中的結果，寫一篇英語調查報告，并且結合實際情況，談談你對未來工作的選擇和原因。PrecentJobReason45%businessmenrich28%teachersteach knowledge20%DoctorsSave lives7%Other jobs/注意：⑴必須包含表格所有內容，并談談自己的未來工作選擇和原因；⑵文中不得出現與你身份相關的信息；⑶0—100詞，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數。短文首句：In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs，we made a survey in our class．【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class. Here are the results. 45% of the students would like to bee businessmen in the future. Because they think if they are rich, they can buy whatever they want. 28% choose to be teachers. They can not only teach students much knowledge, but also feel happy with them. 20% hope to be doctors. In their hearts, doctors can cure sick patients as well as saving people39。s lives. The rest of the students think about other jobs, such as policemen, engineers, nurses and so on.In my opinion, I want to be an English teacher. That39。s because I love children and I love English, too.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇調查報告。文章要按照題目要求，根據提綱中所給的信息完成短文，短文句中時態(tài)用一般現在時，句中的主要是第三人稱，句中使用了一些固定短語和句中結果，例如，would like to do sth. in the future。 be happy with。 hope to do sth. as well as。 think about。 in my opinion。此外文章使用了一些主從復合句，使得文章上下文邏輯關系更加合理。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假定你是李華，最近你們班就低碳生活方式進行了討論，你的英國朋友Peppa向你來信詢問討論情況。請你用英語寫封回信，簡單介紹以下討論結果：1．節(jié)水節(jié)電． 2．垃圾分類 3．少用紙巾，重拾手帕4．步行、騎自行車或公交出行、參考詞匯：low carbon低碳；tissue紙巾詞數：100詞左右。開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。Dear Peppa,T