【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 u will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語，題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了建議。通過審題可知，這是要求寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個(gè)交流，然后引出寫信的目的；接下來給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)；最后寫一個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對(duì)你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡(jiǎn)單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對(duì)他的漢語學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個(gè)部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。8．（陜西西北工業(yè)大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)中考模擬）當(dāng)代雷鋒郭明義，在《幸福就這么簡(jiǎn)單》一書中，用自己的點(diǎn)滴平凡小事詮釋出幸福的 真諦。幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來。那你的幸福觀又是什么 呢？請(qǐng)以 My Happiness 為題寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括以下方面：1. 你認(rèn)為幸福是什么？2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過程與感受）。3. 以自己的感悟揭示：應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福。 寫作要求：1. 短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法準(zhǔn)確，符合邏輯；2. 卷面干凈整潔；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右；4. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My Happiness After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for me,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.【解析】【詳解】幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來，這篇作文要求寫一寫自己的幸福觀，描述自己對(duì)于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過去的幸福往事的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，可以使用到的短語表達(dá)有：happiness is always around you 幸?？傇谀闵磉叄籶ut your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數(shù)學(xué)考試成績(jī)很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見家長(zhǎng)；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難?？傮w來說這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤(rùn)著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)友善行為的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)為了解學(xué)生們的職業(yè)觀，班主任以我的理想職業(yè)為主題在全班做了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的結(jié)果，寫一篇英語調(diào)查報(bào)告，并且結(jié)合實(shí)際情況，談?wù)勀銓?duì)未來工作的選擇和原因。PrecentJobReason45%businessmenrich28%teachersteach knowledge20%DoctorsSave lives7%Other jobs/注意：⑴必須包含表格所有內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勛约旱奈磥砉ぷ鬟x擇和原因；⑵文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；⑶0—100詞，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs，we made a survey in our class．【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class. Here are the results. 45% of the students would like to bee businessmen in the future. Because they think if they are rich, they can buy whatever they want. 28% choose to be teachers. They can not only teach students much knowledge, but also feel happy with them. 20% hope to be doctors. In their hearts, doctors can cure sick patients as well as saving people39。s lives. The rest of the students think about other jobs, such as policemen, engineers, nurses and so on.In my opinion, I want to be an English teacher. That39。s because I love children and I love English, too.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告。文章要按照題目要求，根據(jù)提綱中所給的信息完成短文，短文句中時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，句中的主要是第三人稱，句中使用了一些固定短語和句中結(jié)果，例如，would like to do sth. in the future。 be happy with。 hope to do sth. as well as。 think about。 in my opinion。此外文章使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，使得文章上下文邏輯關(guān)系更加合理。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假定你是李華，最近你們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，你的英國(guó)朋友Peppa向你來信詢問討論情況。請(qǐng)你用英語寫封回信，簡(jiǎn)單介紹以下討論結(jié)果：1．節(jié)水節(jié)電． 2．垃圾分類 3．少用紙巾，重拾手帕4．步行、騎自行車或公交出行、參考詞匯：low carbon低碳；tissue紙巾詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Peppa,T