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the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,談?wù)勎覍?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:Chinese traditional culture is facing……,it’s necessary for schools to……,we shouldn’t……,They can raise……,it is of great importance to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化面對(duì)的問(wèn)題,接下來(lái)介紹我認(rèn)為開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因,最后號(hào)召更多的學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。此處because of, in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。6.書面表達(dá)“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自創(chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來(lái),淄博人民萬(wàn)眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點(diǎn)贊的行為隨處可見(jiàn)。作為中學(xué)生,我們也做出了自己的努力。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所 給要點(diǎn),寫一篇 100 詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。;;;;(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn))參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts(共同努力). Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition(此外), we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore(而且), we are accustomed to (習(xí)慣于)queuing up (排隊(duì)) for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ),例如make joint efforts,as junior students,for example,obey the traffic rules,run red light,in addition,no longer,in public,and so on,what39。s more,on a bus,in need,be accustomed to,queue up,all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使語(yǔ)言表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。7.書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們,中考后就會(huì)迎來(lái)漫長(zhǎng)的暑假了,班會(huì)課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計(jì)劃。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)向同學(xué)們匯報(bào)一下你的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容提示:暑假計(jì)劃學(xué)習(xí)博覽群書;學(xué)習(xí)技能 (或自擬一點(diǎn))生活健康飲食;堅(jiān)持鍛煉 (或自擬一點(diǎn))其它熱愛(ài)公益;親近自然 (或自擬一點(diǎn))注意:1. 表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That’s all. Thank you.【答案】Dea