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,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫(xiě)作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。6.書(shū)面表達(dá)初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活, 你一定有成功的體驗(yàn), 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請(qǐng)你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。提示:(1)What was the event?(2)How did you make it?(3)What’s your feeling?要求:(1)發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題,寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。題目中用問(wèn)題的形式給出了提示,審題可知,文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事;然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難,最后取得成功的;最后說(shuō)一下你自己的感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個(gè)內(nèi)容提要,發(fā)揮自己的想象力,將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整,用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主,注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但要與上下文意銜接起來(lái)。其次要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的,不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維,逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語(yǔ)、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次,應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級(jí)句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,寫(xiě)了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn):首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容,沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,層次清晰。短文主要分成三段,每一段主題都很明確,敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí),動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確,尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確。文章中句式變化豐富,有簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句,長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如When I was in