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以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞?!军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。6. 近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關注。請你用英語寫一篇有關霧霾的短文向??坝⒄Z角”投稿,內容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產生的原因(2個) 3. 應對霧霾的措施(3個)提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數110左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數)。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on. What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據提示來介紹有關霧霾的情況,題目中給出了寫作的內容,我們應將這些內容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息,不能遺漏要點,并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱,通過分析可知,這篇短文應使用一般現在時態(tài),謂語動詞用原形,特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化,這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習慣,英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮,使用恰當的詞匯和句型來表達,語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語,增強文章的表現力。7.書面表達難忘的初中三年學習生活已經接近尾聲,你一定既有收獲又有不足,也有許多對自己未來的期待。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題,根據下面的思維導圖,寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。注意:。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數。,并補充相關信息,可適當發(fā)揮。語言連貫、通順。、校名等相關信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful mid