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以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱,寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。【點(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。6. 近年來(lái)霧霾天氣在中國(guó)許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向??坝⒄Z(yǔ)角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因(2個(gè)) 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施(3個(gè))提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數(shù)110左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on. What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來(lái)介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況,題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容,我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,通過(guò)分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形,特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化,這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來(lái)表達(dá),語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ),增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。7.書(shū)面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲,你一定既有收獲又有不足,也有許多對(duì)自己未來(lái)的期待。請(qǐng)以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題,根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖,寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對(duì)未來(lái)的期盼。注意:。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)言連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful mid