【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ll kinds of afterclasses on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談談自己的看法，和同學們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗。審題可知，文章中應主要包括以下幾個內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過去曾面對的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應由學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。學生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進行介紹。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。句式結構可以簡單句結構為主，這樣的句式表達簡潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應穿插使用并列句和復合句，或使用一些復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式準確。句式結構以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔。也使用了并列句和復合句的結構，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。6．書面表達難忘的初中三年學習生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對自己未來的期待。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。注意:。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。，并補充相關信息，可適當發(fā)揮。語言連貫、通順。、校名等相關信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題，結合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，要點齊全，語言簡練。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學習。7．環(huán)境保護人人有責， 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護自然資源，相信我們的家園會越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can