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about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文。可以分三段寫。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?!驹斀狻?,看看有哪些要求?哪些時態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。、短語、句型。,并運用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點。【點睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題,注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點要全,表達要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。6.書面表達初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活, 你一定有成功的體驗, 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫一篇演講稿。提示:(1)What was the event?(2)How did you make it?(3)What’s your feeling?要求:(1)發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。(3)詞數(shù)80個左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù))。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題,寫一篇演講稿。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示,審題可知,文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事;然后介紹你是如何克服了這個困難,最后取得成功的;最后說一下你自己的感受。寫作時學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個內(nèi)容提要,發(fā)揮自己的想象力,將這些內(nèi)容補充完整,用正確的英語表達出來。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主,注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應(yīng)注意:首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容,不能遺漏要點,可以根據(jù)表達需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但要與上下文意銜接起來。其次要注意英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,不能按照漢語思維,逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語、詞匯進行表達。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為主,穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次,應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,寫了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個優(yōu)點:首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容,沒有遺漏要點。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,層次清晰。短文主要分成三段,每一段主題都很明確,敘述詳細、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確,尤其注意了不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式,語法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確。文章中句式變化豐富,有簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句,長短句結(jié)合,增強了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。7.書面表達初中即將畢業(yè),同學(xué)們都感到壓力很大。就此問題,老師要求你在英語課上做一個以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報告,談?wù)勀愕淖龇?,與同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗。請根據(jù)以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 普遍存在的壓力:同學(xué)關(guān)系;考試2. 我過去的壓力:父母的期望;學(xué)習(xí)3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果;……要求:1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名;2. 詞數(shù)80左右,短文的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________