【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達出來，不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞?！军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。6．書面表達初中即將畢業(yè)，同學們都感到壓力很大。就此問題，老師要求你在英語課上做一個以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報告，談談你的做法，與同學分享經(jīng)驗。請根據(jù)以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 普遍存在的壓力：同學關系；考試2. 我過去的壓力：父母的期望；學習3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；……要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；2. 詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39。s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談談自己的看法，和同學們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗。審題可知，文章中應主要包括以下幾個內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過去曾面對的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應由學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。學生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進行介紹。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，這樣的句式表達簡潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應穿插使用并列句和復合句，或使用一些復雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式準確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔。也使用了并列句和復合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out