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、校名和地名等);: 不少于70詞(開頭已給出, 但不計入總詞數(shù))。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè),讓學生對未來有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學生有話可說?!驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作,因為可以把自己的知識分享給孩子們,并且喜歡學校的環(huán)境。為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想,正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問題,結(jié)束全文?!军c睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ,運用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強,長短句結(jié)合,讀起來朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。6.書面表達每個人都有自己心愛的物品,相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧!請以“A(n) _____ I have”為題,描述一個或一件你心愛的物品,并談談你是如何得到它的,以及它存在的意義。要求:1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。3. 語言表達準確,短文連貫通順,80詞左右。A(n) _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A(n) toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析:這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述,要求是進行描述,并談談你是如何得到它的,以及它存在的意義。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的,在討論其如何獲得的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài),在談論意義的時候要注意表達的準確性,避免不熟悉的表達。寫作亮點:這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍,描述玩具槍的時候有適當?shù)募毠?jié)補充,例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth(用黃布包著的玩具槍),這里用到了過去分詞作定語,作者還描述了玩具槍的功能(small plastic pills),順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經(jīng)歷,準確使用了時態(tài)。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時候不落俗套,講到了自己的家庭那時比較困難,父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的,寫作是富有感情的,也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。最后玩具的意義得到了升華,表達了作者的期望(I hope I can be a soldier),上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面,這樣的一篇作文是有深度的,能夠讓人感動的,是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。7.環(huán)境保護人人有責, 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護自然資源,相信我們的家園會越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談談我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● Wh