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Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強(qiáng)調(diào))the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件,需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間,大明沒有信守承諾的事情,談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,在寫作過程中,注意文章結(jié)構(gòu),先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情,然后再說自己對(duì)此的看法。【詳解】首先,第一句話直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn),大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對(duì)此事件的看法,不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任,對(duì)大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外,還需要再次保證永不再犯。【點(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,符合邏輯,先表明自己觀點(diǎn),然后闡述事情,提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上,比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外,中間也使用了一些連接詞,例如but,so,because of等,使文章更加通順。6.題目②“持之以恒,方得始?!眻?jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情,都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事(愛好,習(xí)慣……),你是怎樣做的,以及你的感受。提示詞語(yǔ):keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題:1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates,I began to practice running every day after ,I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced,I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文,根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事;文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺??!驹斀狻?,用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事,根據(jù)提示,描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時(shí),描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。書寫時(shí)要緊扣主題,文句通順。“跑步”,正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格,通過克服困難、不懈地努力,堅(jiān)持跑步,到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑;結(jié)尾談了這件事對(duì)自己的影響;文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,前后呼應(yīng)。比如:固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of;不定式in order to;try my best to;狀語(yǔ)從句so…that …;比較級(jí)do much better in …、feel more confident等;短語(yǔ)多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。 ”7.為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語(yǔ)雜志將舉辦征文活動(dòng)來介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個(gè)選題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文參加此活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容提示:1. 楊時(shí)去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時(shí)在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時(shí)在門口2. 通過介紹這個(gè)故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)。要求:1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫:詞數(shù):100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實(shí)姓名。【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over hi