【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 紹我們的校園，老師和同學(xué)，最后對(duì)學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。5． 誠(chéng)信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠(chéng)信危機(jī)所困擾。上周末，他本來(lái)和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影，但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試，把這件事忘了，直到第二天才想起來(lái)。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”為題，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：簡(jiǎn)述事件；談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，并給Daming一些建議。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學(xué)生通過(guò)大明和玲玲之間，大明沒(méi)有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫(xiě)出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說(shuō)自己對(duì)此的看法。【詳解】首先，第一句話直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn)，大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)。接下來(lái)說(shuō)出自己對(duì)此事件的看法，不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對(duì)大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)以下圖畫(huà)呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約100詞的短文。要求：?！敬鸢浮縊ne day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們仔細(xì)觀察圖片，弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情，用英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容完整地?cái)⑹龀鰜?lái)，并簡(jiǎn)單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。因此寫(xiě)作前，要仔細(xì)看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點(diǎn)，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語(yǔ)等，或者列出大概的寫(xiě)作提綱。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文講述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。還需注意的是英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣不同，不能逐詞去翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖片所傳達(dá)的信息，表述準(zhǔn)確。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹(shù)澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹(shù)木。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述，條理清晰。文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用了過(guò)去式，尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。7．題目②“持之以恒，方得始?！眻?jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事（愛(ài)好，習(xí)慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提示詞語(yǔ)：keep, practice, difficult, give up, pr