【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢苑秩螌?。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?！驹斀狻?，看看有哪些要求？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。、短語(yǔ)、句型。，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語(yǔ)、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。6．書面表達(dá)初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活, 你一定有成功的體驗(yàn), 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請(qǐng)你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫一篇演講稿。提示：（1）What was the event?（2）How did you make it?（3）What’s your feeling?要求：（1）發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題，寫一篇演講稿。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示，審題可知，文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事；然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難，最后取得成功的；最后說一下你自己的感受。寫作時(shí)學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個(gè)內(nèi)容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但要與上下文意銜接起來。其次要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維，逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語(yǔ)、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級(jí)句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，寫了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，層次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主題都很明確，敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。文章中句式變化豐富，有簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。7．書面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國(guó)筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。請(qǐng)你按照以下提示給他回一封。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語(yǔ)言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something a