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lves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。5.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂(lè)。擁有自信,人生處處是舞臺(tái),生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你為??⒄Z(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?,分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷,并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧L崾驹~語(yǔ):powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing提示問(wèn)題:Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式,采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái),注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫,有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。6.請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,把她介紹給你的外國(guó)朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel(爭(zhēng)吵) with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求:語(yǔ)言要通順,表達(dá)要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語(yǔ)單詞。文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù)?!敬鸢浮縊ne possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce(介紹) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time). After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知,本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述,寫作中主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞?!玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式,如:be glad to do sth高興做某事;a lot of許多;get up起床等。本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper,Sometimes,in the evening等的巧妙使用,使得本文看起來(lái)邏輯清楚,條理分明。在學(xué)習(xí)中,我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn):考查提綱類作文7.同學(xué)們,初中生活即將結(jié)束,本次考試后,盼望已久的假期就要到來(lái)!請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,制定出度假計(jì)劃,可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際發(fā)揮。 寫作內(nèi)容:,享受大自然的美景,放松心情。,幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。 寫作要求: 詞左右,開(kāi)頭部分已給出,但不計(jì)入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。;要點(diǎn)齊全;句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫;書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on