【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 d volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫作要點(diǎn)要包括：。（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn)）。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。6．臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認(rèn)為看書有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉2個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提2點(diǎn)建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來(lái)。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來(lái)寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。寫作時(shí)注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。 7．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（lucky money）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來(lái)越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來(lái)源和用途；2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少 3 點(diǎn)）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方?！敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部