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urs,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強調(diào))the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件,需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間,大明沒有信守承諾的事情,談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,在寫作過程中,注意文章結(jié)構(gòu),先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情,然后再說自己對此的看法。【詳解】首先,第一句話直接點明作者的觀點,大明是犯錯了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法,不信守承諾會導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任,對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯之外,還需要再次保證永不再犯。【點睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,符合邏輯,先表明自己觀點,然后闡述事情,提出自己的觀點和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上,比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外,中間也使用了一些連接詞,例如but,so,because of等,使文章更加通順。6. 書面表達(dá)暑假即將來臨,對于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個假期,家長們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀點。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意](1)表格中的觀點僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名等信息。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點,動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點,然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。7.書面表達(dá)初中即將畢業(yè),同學(xué)們都感到壓力很大。就此問題,老師要求你在英語課上做一個以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報告,談?wù)勀愕淖龇ǎc同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗。請根據(jù)以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 普遍存在的壓力:同學(xué)關(guān)系;考試2. 我過去的壓力:父母的期望;學(xué)習(xí)3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果;……要求:1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名;2. 詞數(shù)80左右,短文的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _______________________________________________________________________